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Colder Blood: true crime in fiction before Truman Capote

Apologies for my absence from the blog recently. The work-in-progress is currently in its final stages, and so the bulk of my concentration and energy is being poured into that. I hope to return to more regular posting soon. In the meantime, here is the transcript of a talk I gave yesterday evening to the North Bute Literary Society, which is not entirely unconnected with the novel I’m working on. This was fascinating to research and write, so much so that I have ideas about expanding it into something more substantial at a later date.

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In a 2010 interview with the American publishing website GalleyCat, the British novelist David Peace talks about how he believes that crime writers, rather than inventing fictional serial killers, should concentrate their minds on interrogating the real events presented in newspaper headlines and police investigations. “I’m drawn to when writers take on history, take on real crimes,” he says. “To me there’s just so much that happens in real life that we don’t understand and we can’t even fathom. I don’t really see the point of making up crimes. I think that the crime genre is the perfect tool to understand why crimes take place, and thus tell us about the society we live in and the country we live in and who we are.”

Peace’s own writing has from the beginning centred itself upon real crimes. The Red Riding Quartet, set against the background of the Yorkshire Ripper murders of the late 70s and early 80s, takes its inspiration from the Yorkshire and specifically the Leeds of Peace’s own childhood and adolescence. His later Tokyo trilogy examines the political and social evolution of post-war Japan through the filter of three real-life crimes that shocked and polarised a nation already traumatised by war and the destruction of Hiroshima and Nagasaki through the brutal force of Allied nuclear weaponry.

Peace claims as his most potent inspiration the American writer James Ellroy, who is so intent upon recapturing the atmosphere of the 1970s Los Angeles he writes about that he still uses a typewriter and has never owned a mobile phone.

We tend to think of the current interest in true crime as a modern phenomenon. Whether it be through podcasts like Serial, Netflix productions like Making a Murderer or closer to home, TV series like David Wilson’s Crime Files, which has a specifically Scottish focus, everyone seems to be talking about, watching or reading true crime. Along with popularity comes criticism – what is it about our society today that has led to what some call a prurient obsession with murder and murderers? Many, inevitably, have pointed to social media as the accelerant and you only have to look at the inappropriate and often abusive social media commentary around cases such as the recent, tragic death of Nicola Bulley in Lancashire to understand why. 

Personally, I have always resisted the narrative around social media that has cast it as the chief villain of contemporary society. I happen to believe that social media is itself morally neutral, its agenda set entirely by those who use it. I would describe it not as the cause of a set of new and by extension worse behaviours but simply as a tool, a faster delivery system for the information, rumours, gossip, and scandal that has always obsessed us.

Truman Capote’s In Cold Blood was published in 1966 and is often hailed as the first ‘non-fiction novel’. In Cold Blood takes as its subject matter the murder, in 1959, of Herb, Bonnie, Nancy and Kenyon Clutter, a Kansas farming family by small-time criminals Richard Hickock and Perry Smith. The two had recently been released from prison after serving time for robbery. They arrived at the Clutter house expecting to make away with more than $10,000. What they got was $40. Capote took more than 8,000 pages of notes in the course of writing the book, which brings the events to life using the techniques of New Journalism – a personal agenda, imaginative reconstruction and the interleaving of multiple points of view. As the writer Rupert Thomson puts it:

“Capote saw journalism as a horizontal form, skimming over the surface of things, topical but ultimately throwaway, while fiction could move horizontally and vertically at the same time, the narrative momentum constantly enhanced and enriched by an incisive, in-depth plumbing of context and character. In treating a real-life situation as a novelist might, Capote aimed to combine the best of both literary worlds to devastating effect.”

Just two years later, the playwright Emlyn Williams turned a similar focus upon the Moors Murderers Ian Brady and Myra Hindley in Beyond Belief, a work that similarly blends hard facts with imaginative reconstruction and that lays emphasis not on the crimes so much as the social background and family circumstances that made Hindley and Brady such an appalling influence on one another.

Both these books were instant bestsellers – and instantly show us that the interest in true crime, for both reader and writer, long predates the advent of the internet. And we can trace that interest back far further than Capote. As early as 1875, the writer Wilkie Collins, perhaps most famous for his fictional mystery The Woman in White, wrote The Law and the Lady, a novel freely inspired by the trial of Madeleine Smith in 1857, a case that also inspired William Darling Lyell’s 1921 novel The House in Queen Anne’s Square. In 1912, Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, best known as the creator of the fictional detective Sherlock Holmes, wrote a freewheeling true-crime account of another Glasgow case, the gross miscarriage of justice against Oscar Slater, falsely accused of murder and whose case was famously taken up by Doyle himself.  

In my previous talk for this society, we concentrated upon writers associated with the so-called Golden Age of detective fiction, the period between the wars when the social order was rapidly changing and whose excitement and unease were so inventively tapped by detective writers. We tend to think of the Golden Age writers as spinning convoluted, sometimes fanciful ‘puzzle plots’ – the antithesis of the gutter-level vantage point of true crime narratives. As it turns out, the Golden Age writers were as fascinated and inspired by real-life crimes as any of their grittier modern counterparts. 

The Anatomy of Murder, published in 1936, is a collection of essays by Golden Age writers such as Dorothy L. Sayers, Francis Iles and Helen Simpson examining some of the most famous true-crime cases of the era. In his introduction to a recent reissue of the book, crime writer, historian and latter-day president of the Detection Club Martin Edwards talks about the fascination felt by Golden Age writers for real cases, how Detection Club meetings would often feature engaged discussion on the latest theory or new piece of evidence. Nor did they confine themselves to abstract discussions. Novels directly inspired by true crimes were as common and popular then as they are now, with many of them displaying much of the same concern and fascination with the social background to crime and the inequalities within society that is often influential not only upon the causes of crime, but how crime is seen and judged.

Perhaps the most written-about criminal ever is Jack the Ripper, whose true identity, ironically, remains unknown unto the present day. Anyone who suspects that behaviours such as trolling and the spreading of ‘alternative facts’ are the product of the internet age might do well to take a look at some of the spurious letters, communications and false rumours that deluged down upon the heads of officers charged with investigating these brutal murders in the Whitechapel of 1888.

More than a hundred years later, crime writers, podcasters and film makers are still writing and talking about the unidentified serial killer. One of the very first novels to take the Whitechapel murders as their key inspiration is The Lodger, written in 1913 by Marie Belloc Lowndes, the sister of the poet and satirist Hilaire Belloc. Sometime in 1910, Marie Belloc Lowndes attended a dinner party where she heard from the painter Walter Sickert of how the landlady of his then apartment in Mornington Crescent first showed him the rooms, telling him that she was sure a previous tenant had been Jack the Ripper. Sickert famously painted the room as ‘Jack the Ripper’s bedroom,’ drenching the scene in his characteristic umber light, producing an ambience of dingy notoriety. Belloc Lowndes drew just as much inspiration from the tale, which inspired a short story published in McClure’s Magazine in 1911, a story that proved so popular with the readership that Lowndes decided to expand it into a novel.  

The Lodger tells the story of Bunting and his wife Ellen, who keep a lodging house on the Marylebone Road. The Buntings meet while they are both in service, Bunting as a manservant and butler and Ellen as a maid. They work in good houses for generous employers, eventually acquiring enough money to set themselves up on their own. However, a series of disappointments and unforeseen accidents have left them without an income and as Lowndes’s novel opens they are desperate. Lowndes makes a point that might well have been missed by modern readers otherwise, that had the Buntings been either poorer to begin with, or more middle class they would have been more certain of finding help within their community. As things stand, they belong to no class, and so are thrown back on their increasingly depleted resources.

When a mysterious stranger presents himself looking for lodgings, Ellen feels his presence almost as a divine intervention. Mr Sleuth, she is certain, is ‘a proper gentleman’. A touch eccentric yes, but quiet, decent and god-fearing, a teetotaller like herself. His needs are simple, and if his habits seem strange then the money he offers in return for his rooms is ample compensation. For the first time in many months, the Buntings see the possibility of a new start. But when a series of gruesome murders becomes the talk of the neighbourhood, Ellen Bunting begins to notice an uneasy correspondence between the scenes of the crimes and her lodger’s nocturnal rambles. As the body count rises, Ellen’s imaginings take on the quality of nightmare.

The Lodger is a fascinating social document, evoking a world in which class is still absolutely the most defining factor in society. In spite of mounting evidence to the contrary, the police find themselves unwilling, almost unable to believe that crimes of such a violent and sordid nature might be the work of a ‘gentleman’, and Lowndes is astute in demonstrating how their blinkered approach actively hampers their investigation. Lowndes’s portrait of Ellen Bunting is the most nuanced, revealing her increasing fascination with the crimes and the ways in which her insights lead her into places and behaviours that would previously have been unthinkable. A romantic subplot involving Bunting’s daughter from a previous marriage dovetails neatly with the main action when Daisy finds herself falling for a detective constable involved with the murder investigations. The Lodger is plainly written, unostentatious in terms of its literary style but Lowndes is an honest craftswoman with a nose for a good story and her descriptions of a London caught up in murder fever are given extra life by her knowing references to other real-life crimes of the period and her professional insights into tabloid journalism and the public thirst for sensation and especially for true crime. Bunting’s clandestine pursuit of his murder fixation in the Evening Standard will raise a knowing smile from all modern day podcast junkies:

Thanks to that penny he had just spent so recklessly he would pass a happy hour, taken, for once, out of his anxious, despondent, miserable self. It irritated him shrewdly to know that these moments of respite from carking care would not be shared with his poor wife, with careworn, troubled Ellen.

Anyone reading The Lodger when it was first published would have been acutely aware of its realworld resonances, and accordingly thrilled.

Lowndes was a prolific writer and journalist, active in society and constantly on the lookout for material suitable for adaptation into the hugely popular novels that, essentially, supported her family. The writer of our next book, Elizabeth Jenkins, was of a very different temperament. Shy and something of an introvert, she was an intensely private woman, who chose her subjects carefully and who expressed her opinions obliquely within her writing. Margaret Elizabeth Jenkins was born in 1905, and lived into our current century, dying at the age of 104. Jenkins studied English and History at Newnham College, Cambridge, and worked variously as a teacher and civil servant before becoming a full-time writer after WW2.

Her most popularly successful novel, Harriet, was published in 1934 and was awarded the Prix Femina, beating both Evelyn Waugh’s A Handful of Dust and Antonia White’s Frost in May. Harriet is based on the infamous Penge murder trial of 1877, fully ten years before the Ripper crimes but a case that excited at least as much attention at the time.

Jenkins, who often insisted she needed the firm armature of a real-life incident to inspire her best writing, first learned about the case when her brother David, who was a solicitor, gave her a copy of The Trial of the Stauntons by JB Atlay, one of the volumes in the Notable British Trials series. David thought the peculiarly enmeshed, secretive family relations at the heart of the case might be of interest to Elizabeth, and he wasn’t wrong. She quickly found herself becoming obsessed with the Stauntons – or the ‘Cudham quartet’ as they became known – and decided to write a novel about them. This of course was Harriet, which in Jenkins’s own words was to be “one of the very earliest instances – if not the earliest – of a writer’s recounting a story of real life, with the actual Christian names of the protagonists and all the available biographical details, but with the imaginative insight and heightened colour which the novelist exists to supply’.

Harriet Woodhouse – Harriet Richardson in real life – lives in London with her mother and stepfather, her birth father, a well-to-do clergyman, having died when Harriet was twelve. As well as a generous settlement from her father’s will, Harriet has been left a sizeable sum of money by an aunt. Harriet has learning difficulties, and although she has a lively and curious nature she depends heavily upon her mother, who has always been determined that her daughter should gain as much life experience as possible within a safe environment.

Harriet is in her early thirties when she first comes into contact with the significantly younger Lewis Oman at the house of a near relation. Lewis, an auctioneer’s clerk, is a good looking young man, and when he starts paying special attention to Harriet she quickly becomes infatuated with him. When he proposes marriage, Harriet’s mother realises immediately that he has no real affection for her daughter, but very real designs on her money. She attempts to have Harriet certified as a lunatic in order to prevent the marriage and protect her daughter, but the family doctor is quick to warn her that this plan will probably fail:

‘You must see,’ said the doctor, ‘that what she’s doing now is done by hundreds of young women who to all intents and purposes are as sane as we are: alarming her friends by wanting to throw herself away on a worthless young man.’

The horror of Harriet’s eventual fate is equalled only by the bizarre network of relationships and lies that enable it. Elizabeth Jenkins’s abiding interest as a writer is centred upon human relationships – between men and women, between families – and her understanding of the characters at the heart of this story is acute and brilliantly rendered. She enters into the mind and heart of each person equally, whether they be innocent, guilty, or a little of both. Her descriptive writing has immense power, as we see here in her description of Lewis, standing at the London dockside not long before his devious plan goes into operation:

Hoarse cries sounding from the water, unintelligible words ceaselessly filling the ear, the perpetual hurrying to and fro of figures in the gloom, made an atmosphere so enthralling that hours passed unnoticed; and as Lewis stood amidst this stir he knew that a power was coming to him, too, that he was about to enter the sphere of those who moved the world by their activity; that whole tracts of his own being were waking to life which had lain stagnant in the routine of poverty and restricted labour.

Four people stood trial for Harriet’s murder: Lewis himself, his brother Patrick, Patrick’s wife Elizabeth and Lewis’s lover Alice. They were sentenced to hang, a judgement that was commuted to a pardon for Alice, and life imprisonment for the others just forty-eight hours before the executions were due to be carried out. Patrick died in prison just a couple of years later. Elizabeth and Lewis were released twenty years later in 1897. Lewis finally married Alice and the couple emigrated to Australia. Elizabeth went on to run a boarding house, where the rumours surrounding her never entirely subsided.

Elizabeth Jenkins did venture into true crime again with her 1972 novel Dr Gully, based on the affair of Dr James Manby Gully, his affair with Florence Bravo and the consequent suspicious death of her husband Charles. Jenkins claimed Dr Gully, published in 1972, as her favourite among her own works.

The third of our spotlighted books was published in the same year as Harriet, though the case that inspired it has remained much closer to the centre of public consciousness, quite possibly because, for one of those who stood trial at least, the eventual outcome represents one of Britain’s most horrific miscarriages of justice, one that even at the time led to vociferous calls for the abolition of the death penalty. The case of Edith Thompson and Frederick Bywaters, popularly known as the Ilford murder, took place in 1922. Edith, unhappily married to the rather staid and predictable Percy Thompson, became passionately attached to Bywaters, a young and handsome merchant seaman who was originally a friend of both the couple, so much so that Percy Thompson offered him lodgings in their house in Ilford.

When Bywaters stabbed Percy Thompson to death in the street in October 1922, he claimed he never set out to kill him, wanting only to confront Thompson in an attempt to resolve the situation between the three of them. Edith played no part in the murder and had no idea Freddy was even in the vicinity. She was arrested solely on account of the love letters she wrote to Bywaters, found in his room after his arrest and filled with tirades against Percy and fantasies about possible ways to get rid of him. The two were jointly convicted according to the ‘rule of common purpose’, and in spite of a million-strong petition pleading for mercy, they were hanged at the beginning of January 1923.

Edith’s case has generated a substantial amount of both fiction and non-fiction over the years and the horror of her execution – the hangman in question, John Ellis, later took his own life – has continued to generate discussion as a standing argument against the death penalty. One of the most interesting fictional treatments of the case is Fryn Tennyson Jesse’s 1934 novel A Pin to See the Peepshow, which is as much an exploration of the background and particular character of Thompson herself as an account of the crime and of the trial. Jesse, a writer and journalist who was the great-niece of the poet Albert Lord Tennyson, had a longstanding interest in criminology and the law. She edited and introduced several volumes in the Notable British Trials series, most notably the Madeleine Smith case and the John Christie case. In 1924, she published the investigative volume Murder and its Motives, positing the theory that there are six main categories of motive that might lead to murder: Gain, Revenge, Elimination, Jealousy, Conviction and Lust of Killing.

In contrast with the rigorous, fact-based approach taken by Elizabeth Jenkins in Harriet, Jesse tells her story using characters and situations more loosely inspired by the real people involved. A Pin to See the Peepshow focuses on the young Julia Almond, an intelligent, articulate and highly imaginative young woman from a lower middle class family who makes a dull marriage and soon wishes herself out of it. From the very beginning, we observe Julia’s love of romance, her desire for excitement and for a life beyond the ordinary suburbs of her upbringing. Her tendency to daydream, to fantasise is beautifully captured by Jesse, not least in the passage that gives the novel its name. Here we see the sixteen-year-old Julia, who is minding a class of younger pupils while their teacher is absent, confiscating a home-made ‘peepshow’ box from the nine-year-old boy who, a mere ten years later, is to change her life forever:  

Then she picked up the box. A round hole was cut into each end, one covered with red transparent paper, one empty. To the empty hole was applied an eye, shutting the other in obedience to eager instructions. And at once sixteen year old, worldly wise London Julia ceased to be, and a child, an enchanted child was looking into fairyland. The floor of the box was covered with cotton-wool, and a frosting of sugar sprinkled over it. Light came into the box from the red-covered window at the far end, so that a rosy glow as of sunset lay over the sparkling snow. Here and there little brightly-coloured men and women, children and animals of cardboard, conversed or walked about. A cottage, flanked by a couple of fir trees, cut from an advertisement of some pine-derivative cough cure, which Julia saw every day in the newspaper, gave an extraordinary impression of reality and of distance. This little rose-tinted snow scene was at once amazingly real and utterly unearthly. Everything was just the wrong size – a child was larger than a grown man, a duck was larger than a horse; a bird, hanging from the sky on a thread, loomed like a cloud. It was a mad world, compact but of insane proportions, lit by a strange glamour. The walls and lid of the box gave to it the sense of distance that a frame gives to a picture, sending it backwards into another space. Julia stared into the peepshow, and it was as though she gazed into the depths of a complete and self-contained world, where she would go clad in snow-shoes and furs, and be able to tame savage huskies and shoot bears; a world of chill pallor, of an illimitable white sky, both only saved from a cruel rigour by the rosy all-pervading light.

To end with this passage seems particularly appropriate, because Jesse demonstrates so well in her writing how fiction has an important part to play not just in bringing information about true-life crimes to public awareness, but in digging deeper into the personal psychology, historical background and possible motivations that might have had an impact on the case. The glorious thing about fiction is that it sets you free to imagine beyond what is already known.

As a final postscript, Edith Thompson’s heir and executor, Rene Weis, who has long petitioned for an official pardon for Edith, finally had his application referred to the Criminal Cases Review Commission in March of this year. I hope that it succeeds. Nothing can make amends for the horror of her execution, but I like to think at least that Edith – imaginative, romantic, adventurous Edith – would be pleased to know that a century after her death, she is a poster girl for women’s justice as well as a figure of inspiration for writers and film makers. Edith Thompson was unjustly killed, dying well before her time, but she has ended up becoming immortal and of that we can be glad.

Cloak and Dagger 2/18 – Neo Noir: Sunset City by Melissa Ginsburg

Although she has pulled away from the self-destructive behaviour patterns of her early twenties, Charlotte has not yet discovered her true direction in life. She is at that awkward stage: filling in time, working as a barista and waiting for something to happen. When a once-beloved childhood friend gets back in contact suddenly, Charlotte is cautious about renewing the relationship. Danielle was important to her – as close as a sister – but when she lost herself in heroin addiction, Charlotte felt forced to distance herself. When she meets up with Danielle for a drink, she begins to feel more hopeful. Her friend has finally kicked the heroin, and seems in a much better place generally. Could be things have changed for the better, after all.

But less than a week later, Danielle is found brutally murdered in a motel room. Charlotte is shattered. She cannot help asking herself if she might have triggered something – if Danielle’s murder might in some mysterious way be her fault. As the police investigation gets underway, Charlotte wonders who stood to profit by her friend’s death: her estranged mother, Sally, her pornographer boyfriend, Brandon, or someone else entirely, someone from the past Charlotte doesn’t even know about. Her friend’s death has raised demons – not least her own grief. And as with any mystery, there are some questions it might be better not to learn the answers to.

Melissa Ginsburg is a published poet, and her awareness and love of language is a defining feature of this, her first novel, an economical and neatly wrought piece of Texas noir from 2016. As fully befits more modern iterations of the genre, she has some fun reversing and reinventing classic noir conventions: men, for the most part, take secondary roles. Centre stage belongs to the women, and so do the drug and alcohol problems. There is a detective – the suitably rugged and likeable Ash – but he always seems to be one step behind the action, as Charlotte’s deeper, sometimes disturbingly intimate knowledge of the suspects in this case bring her closer both to the truth and to personal danger.

The action I would describe as intense rather than fast-paced, although there are moments of violence and genuine tension, and enough surprises to keep trad noir fans happy. The plot is well thought out, coming together in a way that is satisfying and without any of the eleventh-hour stupidity that so vexes me in generic crime fiction. I warmed to these characters, even when I found myself completely at odds with what they were doing – and that is entirely down to Ginsburg’s skill in characterisation, her obvious sympathy with the situations she is describing. Above all I would praise her sense of place. As in all the greatest noir, this is a novel of the city – of urban grime, debauched glamour and moral ambivalence, and if Sunset City belongs to anyone it is to Houston, Texas. Ginsburg finds poetry in the most mundane of subject matter, in small details and moments and sensory impressions lesser writers might skip over or simply not notice.

A short book, but an impressive one, and in spite of the horror at its heart, moving and humane.

Cloak and Dagger #1/30 – Any crime but murder: Those Who Walk Away by Patricia Highsmith

‘If you did kill him,’ she said in a whisper, ‘and if someone else found him that night – they might have been afraid to report it. Don’t you think? Some people are like that. They’d rather walk away – or push the body into a canal.’ Her brows trembled.

Everybody would rather walk away, Ray thought.

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Trust me to begin this challenge with the last item on the list! This was actually a re-read, so I might feel tempted to double up on this category later in the year with something entirely new. But revisiting Highsmith is always a joy and always time well spent.

Patricia Highsmith is routinely described as a crime writer, a label she herself found irksome as she disliked being categorised – she thought of her books simply as novels, and did not see the need or point of allocating them to a particular genre. Given Highsmith’s genius for writing crime novels in which no crime takes place, her ambivalence around the term is understandable.

There are some very nasty murders in Highsmith; equally, there are books of hers in which the shadow of murder hangs like the sword of Damocles over the entire proceedings without ever falling. This seeming unwillingness to commit herself wholeheartedly to the traditional form of the thriller, in which a crime is committed, generating situational or moral chaos before eventually being resolved, preferably with the villain getting their deserved comeuppance, did not endear her to her American editors. In Europe, the interior, almost philosophical nature of her novels has ensured for her work a popularity that extends far beyond the Ripley novels and Strangers on a Train.

I return to Highsmith’s books again and again because they offer a radically different interpretation of what is meant by crime fiction. Her novels offer us questions with no firm answers: if we can read crime novel knowing from the outset that no crime takes place, what exactly is it that we are responding to? And what are the particular properties that make crime fiction so compelling?

In Those Who Walk Away, Rayburn Garrett is a young art dealer whose wife, Peggy, has recently committed suicide. Ray is distraught at her death, and plagued by an unfocused sense of guilt that he should have been able to foresee what was coming, and did not. Peggy’s father Ed Coleman has no doubt that Ray is to blame – he considers him feckless, charmless and insensitive, and the more he dwells on his daughter’s death, the more his grief becomes tangled up with his obsessive and irrational hatred for his indolent son-in-law.

After making a half-hearted, one might almost say experimental attempt on Ray’s life in Rome, Coleman heads for Venice with his current mistress Inez and an entourage of hangers-on. Inez pleads with Ray that he should not try to see Coleman, that he is not in a state of mind to listen to reason. Ray promises her he will leave Venice without speaking to him, then does the exact opposite. What plays out over the next fortnight or so is a kind of duel, a chase in slow motion through the wintry streets of a city bedding down for the off-season. There are acts of violence, but none of them prove fatal. There are acts of deception, but in true Highsmithian fashion these are wilful and ultimately pointless. The moments of highest tension are generated from brief sightings in a busy street, inconclusive phone calls, the imagined repercussions of a confrontation that never plays out.    

Part of the magic for me during this reread was being able to keep track of Ray and Coleman via Google Streetview. When I first read Those Who Walk Away, which must have been about twenty years ago, there was no such thing. Still, I remember being entranced by Highsmith’s portrait of Venice, which is unsentimental to the point of being mundane. Her writing reveals the city’s split identity, its humdrum aspect, which might never become apparent to those who come as tourists.

Highsmith knew Venice well but had something of an on-off relationship with the place. Her descriptions leave us in no doubt of the city’s beauty as it is perceived by its millions of visitors, but they make us aware also of the ways in which for those who live there, Venice is entirely ordinary. Highsmith’s Venice is a city where working people go to and from their jobs, where small, backstreet cafes have their regular morning clientele, where grievances are settled behind closed doors and minor corruption flourishes. Bad weather settles in for days. Unwary Americans shiver in unheated lodgings. Life goes on.

As Coleman and Ray pursue each other through the less frequented backstreets, I found myself checking their locations online, compelled to glimpse something of what they might have seen, not just the thronged and glittering quaysides of Zattere and Schiavoni but also the plainer, less frequented back lots and alleyways of Chioggia and Giudecca, where Ray and Coleman alternately take refuge in the homes of ordinary Venetians.

And of course I fell more in love with the myth of Venice than ever, of course I’m all the more determined to finally visit, once travel becomes less insane. I shall go in the off season, when it’s chilly and when, or so I understand, there are marginally fewer people. I want to sit in a cafe and read, in an unknown little square somewhere. I want to reread Invisible Cities, and think about Ray spinning falsehoods to Elisabetta and finding he cannot bear to leave the city until he has settled the business of Coleman once and for all…

Early on in the narrative, Ray buys a silk scarf he happens to notice in a shop window because it seems so exactly like the kind of scarf his wife Peggy might have owned and treasured. A chapter or two later, Coleman notices the scarf, which Ray has pulled out of his pocket by accident, and demands Ray hand it over. He immediately assumes that it is Peggy’s, and that as such he has a right to it. Ray feels aggrieved and affronted whilst at the same time nurturing a feeling of vindicated spite: the scarf isn’t Peggy’s, so more fool Coleman. This scarf becomes a symbolic stand-in for the acts of duplicity, of mistaken-ness, for the unprovable lies that criss-cross the narrative. It might also be taken as a cipher for the novel’s most notable absence, that is, Peggy herself.

I don’t just mean that Peggy is dead before the novel opens – we never actually get to meet her as a living person. What comes across still more strongly is the fact that neither of these men who are purportedly fighting over her – locking horns like stags, the old king and the venal upstart – would seem to have the slightest clue about who she really was or what she was like.

Both Coleman and Ray go along with and contribute to the received opinion about Peggy, that she was ‘unworldly’, idealistic, more child than woman, that she was somehow ‘disappointed’ by the reality of life and so decided to end it.  Her presence flickers at the corner of our consciousness, barely seen, ghostly, not just because she is dead but because no one seemed to pay her sufficient attention when she was alive.

We know that like her father she was a talented artist – but neither Ray nor Coleman seems much interested in why she more or less gave up painting in the months before her death. Coleman’s grief comes across mostly as the inarticulate, violent rage of a man rudely divested of a valuable possession. As for Ray, he seems mostly to have forgotten Peggy, to have reduced her to an idea, a pretty silk scarf. The conflict he engineers with Coleman is far more interesting to him, far more vital.

As with every duel ever fought, this was never about the woman. It’s a dick-measuring contest. I would love to know if Highsmith herself saw it that way, though I suspect not. Men like Coleman and Ray fascinated her in and of themselves for the curious nullity, the restless dissatisfaction at the heart of their obsessions.

As a writer, I feel there is so much I can learn from Highsmith. Again and again she delivers books in which craft and art are in symbiosis, perfectly weighted and working as one. Her writing is never showy – there is a pared-back, less-is-more quality to it that nonetheless has an element of refinement and literary knowingness that is woefully absent from much of today’s ultra-slick thriller writing.

The landscape of her books – street scene, social milieu and most of all the atmosphere of certain bars, restaurants, hotels, resorts and apartment buildings – is memorably evocative. Rather than relying on hectic and unconvincing circumstantial twists, the drama of her peculiar plots is rendered more or less entirely through the medium of character.

There is no trickery, no formal fireworks. The stories Highsmith tells appear to be simple, even uneventful. Yet there is something, a perplexing oddity, a fierce beauty that makes them both readable and memorable. You may not always get a murder but Highsmith has a way of highlighting the strangeness at the heart of normality that might make you imagine a murder where none has taken place. That’s how it is at the end of Those Who Walk Away. We don’t really have a clue what Coleman and Garrett are going to do next, whether they’ll never see each other again, as each insists, or whether their bizarre duel is going to continue until one of them dies.  

Cloak and Dagger 2022 – a crime reading challenge

2021 is a difficult year to describe. 2020 felt fraught, urgent, dangerous and tense. 2021 has felt more nebulous, more fractured, characterised by uncertainty and an increasing sense of restlessness. In terms of personal achievement, I delivered a new manuscript, a book that for me feels very much like the product of 2020, seamed and studded with all the furious contradictions that year brought but referenced obliquely rather than colliding with them head-on. It’s a novel I’m hugely proud of, and one I look forward to sharing with you in 2023.

In the months since completing that book, I have begun inching my way towards the next work, a transition that has felt more complex and troublesome even than usual. The times we are living through throw up searching questions; as a writer, it does not seem altogether surprising if those questions end up being framed around the process of writing, not just the how but the what and the why. There is never any doubt in my mind that writing – art – has value, that whatever trauma is being addressed, the practice of reflection and analysis, of creative re-imagining inherent to all art is intrinsic to the experience of being human.

Such knowledge should not prevent us from being robust in our seeking out of our own best practice. I count myself fortunate in that this period of not-knowing – familiar in its outline, yet different in its particular details every time – has always felt energising to me. I never quite know how I will come out of it, or what will result. If I can feel certain of anything, through this time as all times, it is the joy I find in the power and the talent of other writers. Discovering new works, new directions, new attitudes, visions and modes of expression – the excitement and the gratitude never lessens.

By this same time last year, the document on my hard drive entitled ‘Books 2021’ was already filling up with upcoming works of fiction and non-fiction I was eager to read. Many of them were books whose publication dates had been postponed, pushed over from 2020 into 2021 in the hope that by the time they were released, in-person events and book festivals would be happening again. This turned out not to be the case, and on the far side of 2021, I cannot help noticing that the number of books on my ‘Books 2022’ list is considerably smaller. There is a sense of uncertainty affecting all of us: what shall we be reading, what shall we be writing? There is an eerie sort of silence.

Here also, there is opportunity. Not knowing – feeling less sure of what I’m going to be reading leaves more space for new discoveries. It also leaves space for me to go back and read more of the books I did not manage to get to in 2021. A year of regrouping, maybe. A year of finding out what is important.

I enjoy reading challenges because they give my reading a focus. This can be especially valuable if the challenge is related in some way to a problem or question that has a bearing on my work in progress. I also enjoy reading challenges because they provide me with a framework for talking to readers. With all of this in mind, I have created my own crime reading challenge for 2022. As regular readers of this blog will know by now, I am always on the lookout for original, challenging and imaginative approaches to genre archetypes, with the mystery archetype foremost among them. For pure reading pleasure, there’s nothing to beat a mystery. There is also no stronger template for withstanding the often punitive process of literary experiment.

I have created thirty prompts, some of them leaning heavily towards my particular interests, others designed to take me into less familiar territory. Thirty seems like a good number – big enough to make the challenge interesting, not so huge that it becomes burdensome, squeezing out all other reading. The individual challenges can be completed in any order, and can be based around any aspect of crime writing: fiction, true crime, journalism, history or memoir can be considered and included for any of the prompts. I am hoping to have completed and blogged all thirty by the end of the year. Here are the prompts. Let’s see how we get on:

  1. Published in 2022
  2. By a debut author
  3. Translated from the French
  4. Translated from the German
  5. Translated from the Italian
  6. Translated from the Spanish
  7. Translated from the Japanese
  8. Set in South America
  9. Nordic
  10. Set in Australia
  11. By an author based on the African continent
  12. By an African-American author
  13. Historical mystery
  14. Experimental published since 2000
  15. Experimental published before 1980
  16. Published by an independent press
  17. Classic noir
  18. Neo noir
  19. Golden Age
  20. Nineteenth Century
  21. Published before World War 2
  22. By a Scottish author
  23. Legal thriller
  24. Financial or military
  25. With a speculative element
  26. Award-winning
  27. Has been adapted for the screen
  28. Woman detective
  29. Based on real events
  30. Any crime but murder

I have some ideas already for how I might fill some of the categories, books I have been wanting to read for a while and now have the perfect incentive to tackle. Others I have not yet started to think about. Mainly I am hoping to be surprised. Surprised and inspired. Here’s hoping we can all find something of the same in 2022.

Happy New Year, everyone.

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