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Weird Wednesdays #15: Clarke Award shortlist 2020 – the reckoning

I’ve spent a great deal of time considering what I want to say about the 2020 Clarke Award overall. If I’d never written a post like this before, the task would not be anywhere near so difficult. I would be able to talk about what I believe the Clarke is for and why it matters without the feeling of deja vu that seems to sweep over me whenever I think about how far this year’s shortlist appears to fall short of that ideal. Such arguments might feel more fruitful if there were more alternative commentary to bounce off, but aside from the initial barrage of tweets praising the shortlist to the rafters and the usual slew of puff-pieces, I have barely seen any. Had it not been for the characteristically even-handed and intricate criticism of Nick Hubble, and the superbly concise and forthright summation from Nandini Ramachandran over at Strange Horizons, I might have believed myself alone in a godless world.

OK, so 2020 has been weird and looks set to get weirder. At the time of writing, the Clarke is running three months late and counting. Normally by the time the Hugos are announced, we already have our Clarke winner. Correspondence between the two awards is traditionally rare. The Hugos are a fan award, with a US-centric voting pool and a different aesthetic – yet in this oddest of years, one part of the general oddness sees a fifty-percent overlap between the Hugo shortlist and the Clarke. Correct me if I’m wrong, but I don’t think this has ever happened before. Even in 2010, the last year to see a British writer winning the Hugo Award for best novel (unless you’re counting dual-national Jo Walton in 2012) the shortlists were radically different.

I was hoping to avoid bringing up the whole anxiety-of-American-influence thing because we’ve been there too many times before but this question of the Clarke/Hugo overlap means I cannot escape it. Part of my disappointment with this year’s shortlist lies in the lack of recognition for British talent. The Clarke is a British award, for novels published in Britain. This is one of the valuable and necessary ways it differs from the Hugos. The submissions list reveals a whole battery of British novels – M. T. Hill’s Zero Bomb, Vicki Jarrett’s Always North, Chris Beckett’s Beneath the World, A Sea, Temi Oh’s Do You Dream of Terra-Two, Jane Rogers’s Body Tourists, Ben Smith’s Doggerland, Will Wiles’s Plume, Jeanette Winterson’s Frankissstein – the presence of any one of which would have raised the overall quality of the shortlist by a substantial degree.

Which makes it all the more perplexing that the one British entry that was chosen by the judges is a journeyman work of genre fiction with no pretensions to innovation or radicalism whatsoever.

And that’s before we even consider the excellent novels not by British writers that were on the submissions list: Last Ones Left Alive by Sarah Davis-Goff, The Migration by Helen Marshall, The Memory Police by Yoko Ogawa, Black Leopard Red Wolf by Marlon James, From the Wreck by Jane Rawson, Dead Astronauts by Jeff Vandermeer, The Need by Helen Phillips, Everything You Ever Wanted by Luiza Sauma, just for example. The judges had plenty to choose from, so what the hell happened?

In any given year – and again, I’ve spent a considerable amount of time going over the facts – there is at least one dud on the shortlist, a novel that seems so out of step with the others in terms of its quality and ambition that anyone with an interest in the award will find themselves asking what it is doing there. Often there are two such novels, the unfortunate result, one suspects, of disagreements between the judges that remain essentially unresolved even unto the day of the award ceremony.

I’ve been back over all the shortlists since the Clarke was first awarded in 1987 and never have there been three duds on the shortlist – until now. The shortlist that runs it closest is 2012’s – otherwise known as the Priestgate shortlist – but even that was more interesting. By virtue of its insanity maybe, but still more interesting. I would also argue that 2012 offered fewer decent submissions for the judges to choose from.

So that’s two firsts for 2020 – a fifty-percent overlap with the Hugos, a fifty-percent dud quotient. I could say I’m baffled by this year’s shortlist but that would be putting it too kindly. I’m sorely disappointed by the judges’ choices because for me they represent nothing less than a catastrophic failure of imagination, the kind of failure no amount of duct tape is going to fix.

The most positive thing I can say about this shortlist is that it (sort of) represents where the genre is at commercially, what kind of narratives are currently popular, how much contemporary science fiction is being influenced by other media. The books that have been chosen also centre a range of political and socioeconomic topics that are very much at the forefront of discussion within the community: most prominently empire and colonialism but also the power of the military, alien intelligence, the role of technology, bodily difference, race, gender and climate change. Exploring these issues and more is very much a central tenet of science fiction and that such themes are raised and discussed in the shortlisted novels is to be welcomed. But as I have suggested in previous posts, having the ideas present is not enough. So much of a novel’s effectiveness depends on subtlety, characterisation, depth of field. Though the list does feel highly contemporary in terms of topics covered, in terms of literary achievement it is pretty thin gruel.

So what does the 2020 shortlist tell us about today’s science fiction as a mode of literature? I am sorry to say that going by four out of the six books, the message seems to be that SF is derivative, repetitive, and mostly burned out. What this shortlist tells us most of all though is something we know already: the quality of an awards shortlist is entirely dependent on the process and critical standards employed by the award jury. From the evidence on display, I am forced to conclude that both have been sadly lacking in 2020. It’s been that kind of year.

Given the uncanny similarity between the two award shortlists, it would seem appropriate to score the Clarkes as I would the Hugos. The Last Astronaut is a sensationalised and pointless retelling of Rendezvous with Rama. The City in the Middle of the Night is a pallid YA science-fantasy peopled with excruciatingly annoying characters. Cage of Souls is a derivative prison-break drama played out against a dying Earth background that could have been plucked from any one of a dozen game scenarios. For me at least, these three novels would all fall below the No Award line. I’m sure they have given readers pleasure, but that isn’t the point. The point is that in terms of their originality, innovation and all-round execution, none of them has any reason whatsoever to be considered the best science fiction novel of the year. As I have argued in my previous posts, the idea is preposterous, and what these books are doing on the Clarke Award shortlist, heaven only knows.

A Memory Called Empire has already won the Hugo Award for best novel and well it might. It wears its heart on its sleeve, it shows its working, it makes use of familiar forms and tropes to tell a story that lies close to the interests of fandom at this given moment – it’s a very Hugo kind of book. It’s also tightly plotted and written with care and attention to detail and with a seriousness of intent that raises it above more run-of-the-mill widescreen space fantasy. It is nonetheless still core genre, still very much of the field rather than challenging it, and I would consider it a very boring choice to win the Clarke.

Which leaves us with two wildly differing books that are both good novels. Namwali Serpell’s The Old Drift is, I think, a great novel, though how it ended up on this year’s Clarke shortlist is almost a big a mystery to me as the presence of The Last Astronaut: by my reckoning, any judge who pushed for the latter would be likely to abandon reading the former halfway through, while any who championed the former would probably resign from the jury rather than allow the latter on to the shortlist. Oh to be a fly on the wall.

Kameron Hurley’s The Light Brigade, by contrast, seems likely to have been the one book all the judges agreed on pretty much immediately: it’s highly contemporary yet fruitfully in dialogue with earlier works, it makes use of a traditional form – MilSF – yet renders it new and exciting, it’s progressive in outlook, adventurous in form, thrillingly alive. It is also well written, strongly characterised, with a feel for language and dialogue that serves the idea and the audience equally well. It is the best kind of genre SF: written with insight and knowledge of what has gone before yet never subsumed by it. It’s a great story, well told. For all these reasons, The Light Brigade would make a worthy Clarke winner – and with any luck one memorable enough to block out any recall of the shortlist as a whole.

That’s what my head says, and I’m fine with that. My heart though belongs to Serpell. The Old Drift is everything I look for in a novel: challenging, difficult, beautiful, heartbreaking, surprising, innovative and timeless. Of the six works shortlisted, this is the one I would personally point to as representing ‘my’ science fiction. I loved this book with heart and mind. I feel privileged to have read it. This is the kind of novel that reminds us not only of why we write, but of everything science fiction can be and do and imagine. I hope next year’s Clarke shortlist will be more like this all round: bolder in form, more adventurous in conceit, more out there in terms of what it offers us on the page. The writers are doing the work, creating the worlds. Looking for them in less well-trodden places would be a good start.

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And the winner is… THE OLD DRIFT, by Namwali Serpell! To say I’m delighted would be an understatement. Of all the book prizes awarded in 2020, I doubt there will be another that pleases me so much, or feels as significant. What a marvellous surprise. Bravo!

Weird Wednesdays #14/Clarke Award #6: The City in the Middle of the Night by Charlie Jane Anders

Five centuries from now, humankind will construct the Mothership, a multi-generation spacecraft that will carry thousands of colonists from a depleted Earth to their descendants’ future home on a new planet. January is a world that has the capacity to support life, but is different from Earth in one major respect: January is tidally locked, with one half existing in total darkness, the other broiling in perpetual, cancer-causing sunlight. The narrow strip of habitable land between the two dwells in twilight, a condition the human settlers adjust to in differing ways.

Many generations and wars later, the two surviving cities on January have arrived at a kind of stalemate. Xiosphant is authoritarian and austere. Its citizens live by clock-time, with day and night artificially simulated through a mandatory system of shutters and curfews The class structure of Xiosphant is equally rigid, with the respect a citizen is afforded largely dependent on which ‘compartment’ of the Mothership their ancestors travelled in. The city of Argelo, by contrast, is a free-spirited party-town, a capitalist oligarchy whose inequalities largely remain hidden from the general populace and whose nine ruling families seem more interested in internecine squabbles than the business of government. Between the two range the Smugglers, bands of rugged individuals who forge their livelihoods shunting goods from Argelo to Xiosphant and back again.

Far out in the frozen wastes there exists a third city, the City in the Middle of the Night, home to the planet’s indigenous inhabitants, key to the planet’s true nature. The human settlers have triggered a climate catastrophe on January without even realising it. If their new world is to survive, they must learn how to co-operate, not only with each other, but with the native inhabitants of the world they have almost destroyed.

The themes of the novel – the legacy of colonialism, racism, cultural appropriation and class prejudice, community, found family, the tensions between inherited tradition and lived identity – are familiar from much of the award-winning science fiction and fantasy of recent years. The City in the Middle of the Night though is ultimately a novel about climate change: the ways in which human behaviour impact on the environment, the cataclysmic effect of such behaviour on non-human populations. The story follows Sophie and Bianca, college friends from Xiosphant, and Mouth and Alyssa, members of a gang of smugglers based in Argelo, four characters facing personal crises whose narratives will eventually coalesce.

If I had to single out one book as the most disappointing from this year’s Clarke Award shortlist, this would be that novel. Though full of potential in terms of both story and subject matter, The City in the Middle of the Night annoyed and frustrated me on almost every level. Whilst The Last Astronaut and Cage of Souls had their problems (poor prose style and unforgivable bloat respectively) they did at least keep me moderately entertained, the former through its propulsive plot and giant centipede-space-worm-thingies, the latter through some halfway decent styling and characterisation. The City in the Middle of the Night, unfortunately, is one long eye-roll.

Let’s start with the material that had potential. One aspect of this novel that caught my attention in a positive way was the treatment and discussion of language and the problems of translation:

People in Argelo had no real way of reckoning the passage of time, but they had plenty of ways to talk about regret. A million phrases to describe what might have happened, what you should have done. Several major sentence constructions in Argelan had to do with information that had been knowable in the past: knowledge that a person had taken to her grave, observations that could have been collected, texts that were no longer readable. The Argelans had developed dwelling on lost opportunities into an art form, but they couldn’t say with any precision when any of these doors had closed.

I love the ideas on display here, the exploration of cultures through their spoken and written languages, and as with A Memory Called Empire, I found myself wishing this aspect of the book had been exploited more. Similarly, the final section of the novel, which deals with Sophie’s decision to transition to alien form, gives richly detailed insights into humanity’s journey to January as well as the history, science and culture of the planet’s original inhabitants. Here we find passages that edge us towards a genuine sense of wonder:

In my dream, I enter another level of the midnight city: a river of solid ice that encases but does not feel cold, rushing into a frozen reservoir under a sky full of stars. I’ve never seen stars, except once at the Sea of Murder, and these keep growing and shrinking, changing their position, flaring and subsiding. Time rolls backwards, and tall cities emerge from the tundra, great gleaming fortresses that withstand storms and quakes for countless generations. These cities climb into the night, drawing energy from the relentless wind and the flows of water and lava under the surface, and then I see them being built piece by piece. A whole earlier Gelet civilisation rises up in front of me, after I already saw it fall.

There is also some interesting discussion around the settlers’ unthinking oppression of indigenous cultures:

The Citizens never even knew what they had done. They invented myths about the Gelet – servants of the Elementals, or teeth in the jaws of eternal darkness – but all of those fables were about what the Gelet could do for people, or to people. The Citizens had stayed blameless in their own cosmology, until the very end.

It is immensely frustrating to me that the way the book is structured means that these passages – imaginative, detailed sequences in which the adolescent machinations of the plot finally give way to interesting ideas – came so late in the novel that I no longer cared. The effect as a whole is one of being top-heavy: the bulk of the book disposable, the remaining kernel of brightness mired in pulp. When I first began to read The City in the Middle of the Night, its themes of clock-time versus lived time, together with its emphasis on young protagonists reminded me somewhat of Karen Thompson Walker’s 2012 geo-apocalypse story The Age of Miracles. I found that book’s soft-centredness similarly irritating, and the novel as a whole was ill-thought-through, though it was at least proficiently written and its languid, somewhat earnest style had a certain charm. I don’t recall much about its plot now, though I seem to remember that the main character, Julia, had an annoying crush on a skater guy, a narrative strand that did not deserve the obsessive focus it was afforded.

Julia’s self-indulgence was as nothing though when compared with the on-again, off-again, overblown juvenile relationship drama between Sophie and Bianca. In terms of its character development and correspondence to lived reality, The City in the Middle of the Night reads less like science fiction and more like (bad) YA romance.

Everywhere we go, people stare at Bianca… She’s wearing a sheer silver dress that leaves her shoulders and most of her legs exposed, a wrap made of loose filaments, and silver sandals… I’m wearing a golden dress made out of some fabric I’ve never seen before that clings to my body in coruscating ripples.

‘Everybody is going to stare at me,’ I grouse under my breath.

‘Good,’ Bianca claps her hands. ‘They should. You look glorious.’

She’s wearing some fragrant oil, and every time I breathe it in, I feel dizzy, half wild with joy, out of control. We’re holding hands! In the street! We’re going to dance together, just the two of us, at some club that has walls made of speakers and air made of glitter. I can’t help feeling like this is buoyant fantasia, like I fell asleep watching an opera, and now I’m dreaming in song.

The whole Bianca/Sophie narrative is like something from a Mills & Boon novel, bubbling with heightened emotion expressed as a series of embarrassing cliches, bringing to mind the breathless crushes and apocalyptic breakups that characterised the picture-stories I remember from teenage magazines. There is little here that could be filed under ‘convincing, adult depiction of actual human relationship’. The segments (like the one above) set in Argelo, with their gushing descriptions of food and drink and clothing and vaguely outre behaviour have all the storm-in-a-teacup drama and faux transgressiveness of a midnight feast at Mallory Towers, and with an amusingly similar chasteness:

‘They’re hosting a giant formal ball, with two of the other families, and I just scored the two of us an invite. Absolutely everyone who matters in this town is going to be there.’ [Bianca] claps her hands together. ‘We’ll have to get ball gowns made, and borrow some jewelry, and dance until we can’t even see straight, and then dance some more, and it’s going to be epic.’

Seriously? In an adult novel?? And what is it with Bianca and the hand-clapping??? Every time Bianca is excited about something, there she is, clapping her hands. And this nonsense goes on and on. The relationship between these two emo kids (who are supposed to be plotting a revolution, by the way – some of the plot lines from Scooby Doo were more convincing) accounts for many, many pages and vast amounts of soul-searching. Clearly it’s intended to be the emotional centre of the novel. Yet the syrupy, one-note characterisation is simplistic and embarrassing; the banter, the smart, quippy dialogue, the unambiguous, feelgood morality tiresomely familiar from a hundred TV shows and superhero movies. And did the characters themselves – who we are supposed to like, to sympathise with, to feel empathy for – have to be so deluded? It’s obvious from page 1 that Bianca is a shallow, self-seeking manipulator. Why does it take Sophie three hundred-plus pages to get over her?

The characters’ naivete and lack of depth is a constant distraction from what might have been an interesting story. Neither is this broad-brush approach a problem that is limited to characterisation. Many of the key sequences relating to the novel’s thematic concerns are lacking in subtlety, manifesting as undigested chunks of polemic badly disguised as human interaction. Again and again, the theme and intention are clear but the execution is bland: characters shouting passages of semi-digested polemic at each other through a megaphone. Reading The City in the Middle of the Night put me in mind of how I felt as I struggled to find positives in Becky Chambers’s A Closed and Common Orbit for Sharke 2018: you can see what the author is doing and while what she is doing might be valuable in terms of opening up science fiction to certain themes and arguments, in terms of their literary impact such novels fall disappointingly short. Flat, didactic and banal, they lack complexity, ambiguity, or nuance.

I find it interesting to note that in the case of both Anders and Chambers (and Arkady Martine, come to that) the parts of their novels I found most satisfying by far were those sequences in which their authors seemed to forget about the plots and characters, concentrating instead on the factual aspects, the subjects – linguistics, geology, biology, xenobiology, post-humanity, climatology – that form their novels’ scientific underpinning. Stripped back to their essence, we see the trajectory of what might have been. There is so much here worth examining. I only wish writers were being encouraged to examine it better.

Neither does it help to see a text scattered with the kind of inappropriate word usage and inconsistencies that seems designed to throw any observant reader out of the story. ‘The layers of permafrost unfold like wings, spreading open to reveal the naked ocean below’, and ‘unsteady fragments of tundra’ are both startlingly inaccurate depictions of what Anders is actually trying to describe, which is a layer of sea ice, or pack ice, breaking apart beneath her attack vehicles. There are also occasional, inappropriate references to time as it is measured on Earth, not January, detailed descriptions of battles that ‘even with the night vision’ would in fact be mostly experienced as a terrifyingly indistinct blurring of shapes and movements, Sophie immediately knowing how to operate a computer when ‘nobody talks to the Mothership, not for twenty generations’. Oh, and here we go again with the permafrost: ‘Alyssa executed a three-point turn, and then coasted the vehicle across a thin sheet of permafrost that seemed to tremble as they passed over it.’ Permafrost, n, is ground that remains continuously frozen for two or more years, located on land or under the ocean. In other words, not ice. It feels mean of me to harp on details like this, and anyone can make a mistake, but for me as a reader, such carelessness at the sentence level serves only to further weaken a text that is already weak.

I suspect that The City in the Middle of the Night has come in for particularly harsh criticism from me at least in part because I came to it straight after reading The Old Drift, a novel that in terms of its depth of field, technical ambition and all round literary ability surpasses it in ways and means too numerous to mention. Once again, I find myself in the position of having to explain that it is not the book as such that is a problem – it has a right to exist, and readers certainly have the right to enjoy it – but the fact of its position on the Clarke Award shortlist. It is easy to see why the judges might have been attracted to some of the themes Anders’s novel is centred on, but like so much of the current output, The City in the Middle of the Night is suffused with the sense of having been written for a particular fandom at a particular time. The nomination of such books for awards would seem to be the result of a current and increasingly widespread tendency to judge novels according to what they appear to be about, rather than how those themes are tackled in terms of words on the page. For me personally, this counts as slipshod, one-sided criticism, a criticism that is concerned with the promotion of particular ideas as opposed to the promotion of texts of genuine literary substance – texts that allow those ideas the depth and quality of consideration they deserve.

I believe passionately in the value of the written word in exploring and disseminating ideas. I believe especially passionately in the value of science fiction in pursuing a radical, progressive and diverse agenda. But I believe equally in close reading, for both readers and writers, in the study of how words are used and how stories are told. In the case of awards, and especially awards shortlists, I believe such attention to detail is of the highest importance, that it cannot, or at least should not, be deemed of lesser importance than context, theme or historicity.

The Clarke Award is for the best science fiction novel of the year, not the most popular. This is something every current and future award judge should bear in mind.

Weird Wednesdays #12/Clarke Award #5: The Old Drift by Namwali Serpell

Your desire to conquer, to colonise others, is both too fixed and too free. Nothing escapes your dull dialectic: either it takes a village to live or to each his own to survive. Even your debate on the best way to be falls on either side of this blade. The social contract or individual free will, the walls of a commune must keep us close or capital must run rampant. That’s how you froze your long Cold War, with this endless, mindless divide.

How often does it happen that you fall in love with a book? Not at first sight, but through continuing acquaintance? That you are persuaded, encroached upon, seduced? That you come to realise that your gathering conclusions about a text have all been reversed?

Some books you simply enjoy. Some you admire. Some you forget more or less as soon as you’ve finished reading them. I have found, almost invariably, that it is those books you come to have a relationship with, that you even struggle with at times, that tend to bring the most lasting satisfaction. There has been a resistance in certain quarters to describing books as ‘difficult’, as if difficult were code for elitist, as if the necessity of having to work at something automatically precludes the idea of pleasure or inclusiveness. What bollocks. Books don’t ‘have’ to be difficult to be enjoyable, of course they don’t. Books don’t ‘have’ to be anything, and neither do readers. But for some readers, the work is the pleasure, or at least a significant part of it. The sense that you have grown as a reader in the process of reading. That the book you have just completed has enhanced your perception both of the world, and the written word.

For its length alone, The Old Drift might be said to encompass an element of difficulty. To read six hundred pages demands commitment from the reader, not just of time but – with a text so richly detailed and intricately structured – of attention. The Old Drift begins – well actually, it begins with a family tree, a fact I had completely forgotten because I skipped over it, and stumble upon only now as I retrace my steps to find a particular quote. The family tree is printed too small for me to read without my magnifying glass. Not wanting to fanny about so early on I jumped the page and dived right in, knowing nothing, no names, no spidery outline of relationships, and now here I am wondering how that might have altered my relationship with the novel. Did it enhance my sense of difficulty, or not? Did it augment my pleasure in working out the network of familial connections (not difficult, if you’re concentrating) for myself? I’ll never know, and that fact also I love. Looking at the family tree now through the lens of my magnifying glass I feel the pleasure of remembrance, nostalgic already for the moments before I came to know these characters, those moments in which their lives lay still ahead of me.

As I was saying, The Old Drift begins with (the mosquitoes, then with Dr Livingstone, then) Percy Clark, ‘a wanderer, a brute, a cad, the forefather who started it all’. He’s come to Africa from Cambridge, under something of a cloud. In those early years of the twentieth century, the country of Zambia still does not exist, or rather has not been named as such. Percy makes his way inland in search of a place to be and a vocation to follow:

I set out for the drift five miles above the Falls, the port of entry into north-western Rhodesia. The Zambesi is at its deepest and narrowest here for hundreds of miles, so it’s the handiest spot for ‘drifting’ a body across. At first it was called Sekute’s Drift after a chief of the Leya. Then it was Clarke’s Drift, after the first white settler, whom I soon met. No one knows when it became The Old Drift.

For the settlers, the land is unforgiving and strewn with difficulties. Many die of disease. Those who survive forge a sense of ownership that is entirely unearned. Percy forms an acquaintanceship with Pietro Gavuzzi, the manager of the newly constructed Victoria Falls Hotel, where Percy earns a modicum of fame through being the first diner in the audaciously upmarket restaurant. The stories and families of Percy, Gavuzzi and N’gulubu, a Zambian boy assaulted by Pietro’s daughter Lina in the dining room of the hotel will, over the course of the following century, become inextricably linked and intermingled as a new country is born, a monumental engineering project is conceived, and history itself is laid down, fought over, and remade.

For more than half of its length, The Old Drift reads like a family chronicle. Dense in detail, rich in language and imagery, hugely intelligent in its insights and observations, it’s an impressive achievement on this level alone. In its examination of class especially I kept being reminded of Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie’s Half of a Yellow Sun. In its interweaving of familial bonds and human relationships, I couldn’t not think of Bernardine Evaristo’s Girl, Woman, Other, though for me The Old Drift, with its rigorous underpinning of history and cogent analysis of colonialism and its long-haul aftermath, is the nittier, grittier, broader and deeper and more memorable reading experience by far.

All of that is just the beginning, though, for it is in its latter third that this novel truly begins to show its colours, to ripen and to reveal itself for the genre-busting, formally innovative, revolutionary and science fictional masterpiece it truly is.

For anyone reading this book, hitting the 400 pp mark and thinking where’s the science fiction?? let me tell you I feel your doubt and bewilderment, because they were also mine. There are hints all along, of course, of where the book is going, what it is doing – the chorus of mosquitoes (some of the finest writing at the sentence level in the whole book), the building of the dam, the crazy Zambian space program – but for a long while they do not seem to add up to enough (not nearly enough) to make the book science fiction. I was all prepared to write an essay on how I admired The Old Drift in terms of its literary achievement but what was it actually doing on the Clarke Award shortlist?

But then, when Lionel Banda and later his son Joseph (they’re both descendants of Percy) begin and pursue researches into a vaccine for HIV, there’s a sort of seismic shift in the sensibility of the novel that acts not as a break in tone, but as a mechanism that transforms the very essence of what has gone before. You know that feeling you get when you’ve spent hours trying to assemble a piece of IKEA flatpack – all that ‘insert bolt A into bracket D’ stuff that never quite pans out as it is supposed to in the inadequate diagrams – and then suddenly you twist that little Allen key one more time and the whole thing slides into place and you have a piece of furniture? For me, reading The Old Drift really was like that, and to experience that paradigm-shift, in real-time, is going to count as one of my stand-out reading experiences of the year.

That HIV in the novel is referred to throughout simply as ‘the Virus’, and that so much of the discourse on immunology, a foreign subject to most of us until mere months ago yet now queasily familiar, is one more miraculous twist of the knife of perception:

Your beastly old tales know it all so well: we are Nature’s great superfluity. ‘What is this creature for?’ you still cry, raising your fist to the heavens. We pollinate little and feed very few, and no predator needs us to live… We’re an asterisk to Nature, a flaw, a digression, a footnote if ever there was one. We are not just an accident, but issue it too. .. Joseph himself has learned this the hard way: his vaccine, founded upon a mutation, has foundered on capital’s reef. But all sorts of things can slip through the cracks, especially genetically tweaked ones. Evolution formed the entirety of life using only one tool: the mistake…

The Old Drift ends up in the very near future. Climate change is a life-altering reality, new technologies are revolutionising the revolution of digital communication. The seeds of destruction sewn in the midst of the twentieth century – the displacement of peoples, the pillaging of natural resources, the inattention to the long-term environmental effects of human activity – are bearing bitter fruit. And yet, the silver seam of history continues. ‘I want to tell them that our minds are free, even if our hands are tied by poverty,’ insists Joseph’s half-brother Jacob, and it is this quality of endurance, of curiosity, of wild innovation, the determination to survive that most characterises the novel as a whole, that becomes its message.

The science writing, the existence of an overarching theme, the formal innovation, the propensity to surprise and to question assumptions, the imaginative reach, the view of time as infinitely flexible, the ability to postulate alternative futures and different worlds – these are some of the characteristics that help us to define what science fiction is and what it can do. These qualities are boundlessly present in The Old Drift. There are some books you receive as a gift, a light upon the way and this is one such. I feel lucky to have read it, inspired by a writer whose vision and reach seem set to take her wherever she wants to go. I can’t wait for her next novel.

Where does The Old Drift stand as regards my thoughts about the shortlist overall? Well, we still have one more book to go, so this will have to be a question of wait and see. In the meantime, I would encourage anyone with a passion for words, for indelible stories, for more inventive interpretations of the term ‘science fiction’ to read The Old Drift. Sink in, take your time. The book will reward you. At the very least, read Richard Lea’s excellent interview with Namwali Serpell here, or watch this fabulous online conversation between Serpell and Carmen Maria Machado here. We are so lucky to have writers of such talent and originality working in speculative fiction right now.

Weird Wednesdays #10/Clarke Award #4: Cage of Souls by Adrian Tchaikovsky

‘I do not know who he was, nor do I care,’ the Marshal said. ‘That was an example. You are less than nothing to me and my staff, and we will kill any one of you without a second thought. If you wish to remain alive you will do everything in your power to avoid angering us, and even that may not be sufficient. You have no rights. You are nothing more than vermin and the boat brings more of you every month. I could have the lot of you killed here and now, and not want for workers.’

Strap on your gun-belts, guys. It’s going to be a bumpy ride…

Stefan Advani, whose family once owned a grand house and whose father had a way of charming even his most persistent creditors, has fallen from grace in the most conspicuous manner possible. Escaping poverty through education, Stefan’s resourcefulness and mental agility have seen him gain a promising reputation within the cloisters of the Academy. But there are those who would rather the clever-dicks remained in their ivory towers as opposed to raising the consciousness – literally – of the working people. Charged with incitement to revolution, Stefan is captured and shipped to the Island Chemical Mining Corporation Colony, aka the Island, aka a forced labour camp no one escapes from except through death. And death stalks the island constantly, in multiple guises. ‘This is the oubliette,’ Stefan informs us, ‘the cage of souls. Sending an enemy to the island was as good as killing him. Better, because the island could deal out years of suffering.’

Not that the world beyond the Island is a bed of roses in any case. Ravaged by climate change, environmental degradation and wave after wave of genocidal wars, not to mention a sun that has entered its declining years, the Earth is a dying planet. Its jungles, deserts and waterways swarm with hostile, mutated life forms. What people remain cluster together in Shadrapar, the last city on Earth: sanctuary, bunker, redoubt, criminal underworld, all sitting in the shadow of the Weapon, an annihilating force turned memorial whose original purpose and origins are long forgotten. Shadrapar is no utopia but it is the only home Stefan knows and the focus of his determination to escape the island.

As he learns the pitfalls and occasional pleasures of prison life, Stefan makes friends as well as enemies. When the Marshal’s reign of terror is finally challenged, the comrades know they have only a limited time in which to make their escape.

Regular readers of science fiction will be quick to recognise Cage of Souls as a ‘dying Earth‘ novel, a subgenre in which the action is played out at a purported ‘end of time’ against a background of societal decay and environmental degradation, with technology absent or half-forgotten or assuming the properties of magic. Dying Earth stories have their origins in the fantastic literature of the late nineteenth century, though the subgenre was named and popularised by Jack Vance, with his 1950 collection The Dying Earth. The most complex and ambitious example of dying Earth literature is almost certainly Gene Wolfe’s four-novel sequence The Book of the New Sun, which appears at first to be traditional epic fantasy but reveals itself gradually and through a series of bravura literary manoeuvres as science fiction.

Well, I love Gene Wolfe’s work, and if you’d rather not be present at a blood-letting, look away now. Better still, go away and read this masterful essay by Brian Phillips on the literary legacy of Gene Wolfe – it’s one I return to whenever I get depressed about the state of the field, which is depressingly often. All I really knew about Cage of Souls going into it was that it is a dying Earth novel, a fact that made me hopeful that I was going to enjoy it. It’s not just Gene Wolfe I love, it’s the tropes of dying Earth stories in general, not only their elegiac resonance but also the seeds of hope and regeneration and new beginnings they carry within them. The omens were good. So were did it all go wrong?

Where do I start?

The chief problem with Cage of Souls is that it’s not really about anything. And when a novel is six hundred pages in length, that’s one hell of a problem. Stripped to its bare essentials, Cage of Souls is a prison-break novel: Advani is a young man riding high who makes a crucial mistake. He ends up in jail with no hope of release. He forms a pact with other prisoners and manages to escape (none of these details are spoilers, 1) because the chapter headings lay out the map for you and 2) because the trajectory of the plot is obvious from the start). He returns to his old stamping ground to find himself and his erstwhile home irrevocably changed. What’s wrong with that? I hear you ask. Thousands of novels have been built on less. Aren’t the simplest plots the best, because they leave space for the writer to focus more on character?

Yes, and yes, but focus on character is not what Tchaikovsky chooses to do. The question I asked myself most often throughout the course of my reading, and in tones of increasing desperation, was why? Why should we care about Stefan, other than that he is the narrator of this bloated shaggy dog story? Is our focus supposed to be Stefan, or his world? Are we supposed to care about the reasons for society’s collapse, or are we just in this world now, marooned in a kind of Mad Max situation where the point of the novel is literally the action, nothing more?

Tchaikovsky’s writing is professional and competent. The story flows smoothly enough – at least for the first three hundred pages – to keep you interested and coming back for more, the characters are well enough defined to encourage at least a modicum of personal investment. But there is no true depth of field; no one ever does anything you haven’t been expecting them to do for the preceding fifty pages, no one achieves autonomy over and above their designated archetype. The unwilling hero, the comic relief (although I did rather enjoy Lucian, actually), the guard with a heart, the thuggish despot, the evil nemesis, the good aliens – they’re all here, all playing to type. The dialogue’s fine so far as it goes (this is no Last Astronaut) and we do get some women in play, but their characterisation isn’t great, to be honest:

Like so many others brought up in strict religious purity she gambled, cheated at cards, drank stuff that made men blind, swore like an Outrider and flirted with everybody. Everybody but myself.

That’s Rosanna, our hero’s first serious girlfriend (until she’s fridged) and classic kickass ladette. Kiera and Hermione are just bit-parts, the cool girl and the big girl. Lady Ellera the ‘Witch Queen’? Speaks for herself. And the mysterious Faith – is she an android or a genetically modified human? Who cares, except that every man who encounters her is left with a suicidal/homicidal Helen of Troy complex. Faith’s plot strand is never resolved – which is pretty much the story of every plot strand and detail that might conceivably have been interesting. For example:

In Shadrapar we ate what we grew in the ground. Raising animals for food was a disgusting process abandoned in ancient times. The idea of consuming the flesh of another creature was vile and turned my stomach.

This kind of societal shift could have been a fascinating premise to explore, but sadly it’s a gesture only, never properly imagined or invested in. The supposed vegetarian lifestyle of Shadrapar’s citizens feels wildly out of kilter with the dawn-to-dusk random killing that goes on throughout the rest of the book, and we could say the same of the ‘back to the earth’ culture of burial, so respectfully alluded to at one point, never mind the genocide of the Underworlders. I can’t see anyone finding the time to feed that mountain of bodies back into the great circle of life.

An early expedition into the desert could have provided a rich opportunity for Tchaikovsky to give us more detail and discussion of the trajectory of the disasters that led us here. Instead, it’s just a loosely disguised opportunity to fight more monsters. And while we’re on the subject, Tchaikovsky’s constant, undifferentiated, literally hundreds of usages of the word ‘monster’ are in themselves indicative of a failure of imagination. Language gains power through specificity: to be told a tree is a tree is one thing, to be told a tree is an oak is to be furnished with a richer and more resonant image. The more precise we can be, the more accurately our vision is transmitted to the reader. Used incessantly and ubiquitously as it is here, ‘monster’ is a dead word and a lazy one; it tells us nothing. For a book that clearly prides itself on its worldbuilding, there’s not enough of it going on.

Similarly with the past-cultural references, which are a time-honoured tradition in dying Earth stories. On the aforementioned trip into the desert, Stefan and his, uh, short-lived comrade Jon de Baron find an ancient copy of Lewis Carroll’s The Hunting of the Snark – we know what it is from the line Stefan quotes from it. Is the appearance of this particular text supposed to underline the dangerous futility of their quest? Cast a light upon past cultures and the attitude towards them now? Turns out it’s just casual name dropping. Similarly:

Sergei [a time-travelling cosmonaut from 1972] had joined up with the Morlocks first of all. They were a proactive and impolite debt-recovery crew who put his imposing appearance to good use.

which I present without comment. H.G. Wells in-jokes aside, Sergei as a character has more potential than any other to give this novel some backbone – yet again he’s just a bit-part, comic relief.

There are germs of ideas everywhere in Cage of Souls, gestures towards consolidating a vision, each one abandoned in the service of yet another killing spree. Indeed, there is precious little to be told that doesn’t involve people running around with big swords. Cage of Souls is basically Grimdark fantasy that just happens to be placed in a dying Earth setting.

And the point of all this?

The agitators behind that crowd had been selfish and evil reactionaries, and Peter was a good man. I was unsure that this was a material difference. I was also unsure that once a man has raised the mob (for there is really only one mob, waiting in potentia to be raised) whether anyone can keep it from the barbaric acts of violence it strains for. We must be careful what we become when we seek to change things. An old principle of physics: if you push, you yourself are pushed in turn.

Power and the struggle for power, the inbuilt limitations of the Marxist dialectic – this is the gist of what the book is about, though the pointlessness of the journey massively overwhelms the destination. The novel’s philosophical underpinning, when set against the kapok-stuffed vastness of its interior spaces, is scant, and ultimately, the battles and the killing are not about anything save what is literally described. Let us be clear: it is not the violence per se that is an issue – there is plenty of violence in The Light Brigade, and what is more, Hurley’s violence is more upsetting because the story and characters are deep and rich enough to make us care about its outcome. The point is, the subject of The Light Brigade is military violence – a subject that is explored, investigated, argued over and confronted, the novel’s plot and action seamlessly in service of its central idea. It would be impossible to argue that Cage of Souls is ‘about’ violence and power in the same way; there is simply a lot of violence in it, an endless array of battles, stand-offs and executions that become excruciating not so much through their cruelty as through their unending narrative tedium. Ironically, this is something Stefan himself is made to realise:

The Marshal stared about him, and there was less of a reaction than he was expecting. Deep inside, I was not the only one who was becoming jaded. One can only live with random violence for so long before the shock wears off.

You said it, Stef. Yet Tchaikovsky only seems to become invested in his narrative when describing a battle or other scene of conflict, and it is clear from the beginning that it is these fight scenes – not just the set pieces themselves, but the technical aspects of choreographing them – that form the core of the author’s purpose in this novel. I wanted to be interested by his interest, by his own immersion in the nuts-and-bolts detail, because I am fascinated by specialist knowledge whatever the area. But God alive, the fight scenes in Cage of Souls must add up to at least fifty percent of the narrative. That’s three hundred pages of stuff that reads like the screen directions for House of Flying Daggers. ENOUGH ALREADY!! It gives me no pleasure to say this, but rarely have I felt so bored and so trapped when reading a book. Towards the end, my sense of being held mentally captive began to assume the discomfort of being physically restrained.

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Helplessly immured within the six hundred pages of Cage of Souls, there is a tightly woven, intensely descriptive three-hundred-page novel begging and crying to be set free, and I don’t think I’d be nearly so wound up about this book if it weren’t so frigging long. To write at such length, to demand the reader’s attention over such a prolonged stretch is a presumption, and there should be a reason for making it. One would expect at the very least that the author has something urgent, important and complex they wish to communicate. Cage of Souls waffles on for a very long time but it has nothing of significance to say, either in the manner of its telling, the power of its story or its contribution to the dying Earth genre.

Where Kameron Hurley’s The Light Brigade and indeed Arkady Martine’s A Memory Called Empire stand in dialogue with earlier works, challenging and directly subverting them, Tchaikovsky does little beyond aping the style and story furniture of Vance and Wolfe, neither making commentary upon it (as M. John Harrison does in his Viriconium sequence) nor extending or augmenting our understanding of dying Earth archetypes. As science fiction, Cage of Souls is basic and largely derivative, a series of events as opposed to an overarching concept. Although Cage of Souls purports to be SF, this lack of a guiding central conceit leaves it insufficient impetus to be properly science fictional in its sensibility. Its loose, episodic structure and extended trajectory have much more in common with works of epic fantasy. This is an old-school, high action adventure story, composed with intelligence, some style and a sound knowledge of its predecessors. But to what end and, most importantly for our purposes, why the Clarke?

As with my commentary on The Last Astronaut, I find myself in an uncomfortable position, a position I would not willingly have chosen. For the purposes of entertainment and reading pleasure, for those who enjoy action-adventure in a fantastical setting, Cage of Souls holds up OK. The tropes are hoary and the situations predictable but the world Tchaikovsky creates is colourful and textured, peopled with a cast of characters we come to know and if not exactly love, then at least enjoy following. I was never the intended audience for this book, and I would not normally have presumed to comment on its fitness for consumption. But as a critic and as a writer of speculative fiction I take a passionate interest in the Arthur C. Clarke Award, and if a novel is presented to me as one of the six best science fiction novels of the year, as reader and writer I am bound to sit up and take notice. As critic and commentator, I am bound to subject that work to the kind of critical scrutiny I would expect from the Clarke jury.

As critic, writer and reader, I am hereby mind-boggled. Even from my own reading of 2019 novels – not nearly so deep and so wide as the reading undertaken by the jury – I can attest with some confidence that Cage of Souls is not one of the six best science fiction novels of the year, and I could point to a dozen and more on the submissions list that would easily take precedence. I have read and searched in vain for a single good reason why Cage of Souls has been selected for the shortlist, and I cannot find one. As with The Last Astronaut, the only explanation I can think of for how it ended up there is that one or other of the judges really got a kick out of reading it. That is not a good reason, or at least it is not a proper deployment of critical process.

To give Cage of Souls a place on the shortlist is necessarily to deny that place to another, with all the publicity and attendant benefits such a placing implies. Bizarre anomaly or critical laziness? Either way, I am disappointed.

Weird Wednesdays #9/Clarke Award #3: The Light Brigade by Kameron Hurley

When your choice is to work or to die, that is not a choice. But Sao Paulo was no choice, either. It was a bad death, when this world was more than rich enough to ensure we could all eat, that no one needed to die of the flu or gangrene or cancer. The corps were rich enough to provide for everyone. They chose not to, because the existence of places like the labor camps outside Sao Paulo ensured there was a life worse than the one they offered. If you gave people mashed protein cakes when their only other option was to eat horseshit, they would call you a hero and happily eat your tasteless mush. They would throw down their lives for you. Give up their souls.

The future of Earth looks grim. Ten generations hence, the world’s premier power-brokers are not elected governments, but massive corporations, engaged permanently in a battle for supremacy amongst themselves. If you’re lucky enough to be a full citizen, you have access to healthcare, safe working conditions and subsidized training programs. As a mere resident you would be less privileged, able to live and work without persecution but with few actual rights. Fall foul of the status quo in any way and you’ll end up a ghoul, scavenging for resources in one of the vast undocumented labour camps, no one giving a damn if you live or (sooner rather than later) die.

On Mars, colonists who were once citizens have broken away from the corporations to form their own ‘free’ republic. Sensing that the Martian revolution could spread back to Earth, the corporations have vowed to wipe out their insurgency. Dietz grew up as a resident of the corporation city of Sao Paulo, only to see what was left of her family destroyed in an act of genocide known as the Blink. The corporation insists the Blink was perpetrated by Mars. Dietz joins the army hoping for the chance to make a difference – and possibly to become a hero. As she readies herself to face the Martian enemy, Dietz must also prepare for the additional dangers of life as a soldier in the Light Brigade: in order to cross the vast distances of space, soldiers are made to attain the speed of light by literally becoming light. Not all of them survive the process. A few, like Dietz, are being transfigured in ways the corporation never intended.

As Dietz’s timeline becomes ever more confused, she begins to understand that the enemy she has been fighting is not who she thought they were, that the war designed to defeat them appears to be unending. Even as her knowledge grows, each ‘drop’ presents a new risk of death. As Dietz struggles to outrun her masters, she finds her old ideas about heroism and soldiering coming increasingly under fire.

What a ride, what a charge. Kameron Hurley was last shortlisted for the Clarke Award back in 2014, for her debut novel God’s War. I enjoyed and admired God’s War, but had fallen somewhat out of touch with Hurley’s work since, so I was pleased to have the opportunity to read her latest within the context of the Clarke. What a delight it is to see a writer fulfilling her potential. What I loved most about God’s War and the short fiction from Hurley that I’d read in the interim was its densely textured language, and The Light Brigade is immediately, thrillingly identifiable as by the same hand. Time (and increasing fame) has done nothing to slow or flatten the vividness and immediacy of Hurley’s approach, nor compromise its intelligence or conceptual ambition.

What time (and experience) has done for Hurley is exactly what it should do for a writer, that is, to strengthen and deepen her technique. The Light Brigade is a remarkably complex piece of plotting. In less capable hands, the timeline could have become either too confusing or else reliant on clumsy exposition. Hurley nails it beautifully, presenting us with a story that is not only fast paced (and how!) but finely detailed and emotionally impactful. All questions are finally answered, and in a satisfying way. The order of events is complex but stick with it and you’ll discover everything makes sense. The characterisation is deft and moving – you really do get to know these soldiers, to fear for them, to care for them. Hurley’s language is leaner and meaner than it was in God’s War, maybe, but its beauty and personality is present, correct, and firing on all cylinders. The dialogue is particularly commendable: pacy and entirely contemporary whilst retaining a genuine individuality and never sliding into movie cliche.

For anyone who enjoys MilSF – and equally for those who think they don’t – The Light Brigade could be their novel of the year. Hurley’s interrogation of war’s crossed purposes, its vested interests, its abuses of loyalty and twisting of facts, its many ways of consolidating power in the hands of the powerful is righteous and damning and expertly argued. I need hardly mention that her treatment of gender and personal identity is not only bang on, but seamlessly integrated into the text. This novel is exciting and highly charged and it augments and enhances those qualities by being politically literate in a way that is deeply relevant to our times.

The everyday person doesn’t want war, but it’s remarkably easy to convince them. It’s the government that determines political priorities, and it’s easy to drag people along with you by tapping into their fear. I don’t care if you have a communist mecca, a fascist regime, or a representative democracy, even some monarchy with a gutless parliament. People can always be convinced to turn on one another. All you have to do is convince them that their way of life is being attacked. Denounce all the pacifist liberal bleeding hearts and feel-good heretics, the social outcasts, the educated. Call them elites and snobs. Say they’re out of touch with real patriots. Call these rabble-rousers terrorists. Say their very existence weakens the state. In the end, the government need not do anything to silence dissent. Their neighbours will do it for them.

Although The Light Brigade works perfectly well as a standalone novel – you don’t need to have read any of Hurley’s other work or even any science fiction to get on board – it is important to note the many and clever ways in which it is directly in conversation with older works of SF. I have not yet read Robert A. Heinlein’s Starship Troopers but from my brief researches around the text I can see how a good portion of The Light Brigade’s polemic lies in strenuously confronting Heinlein’s glorification of the military lifestyle and moral code, his proposition that only those who bear arms should have full rights of citizenship, including the right to vote (???!) I have read Joe Haldeman’s The Forever War, the other novel that Hurley’s is clearly in dialogue with, and while ideally I would have reread that book in order to have a proper discussion of it here, time has run out on me. Whilst confirming and supporting many of the arguments set forth by Haldeman, Hurley updates, redresses and clarifies issues of gender and representation that were (perhaps understandably) less fluently handled in the earlier novel.

This is all part of the joy of what the SFF community calls the conversation. Hurley has not only written a tense, original and beautifully executed novel, she has contributed at a high level to the ongoing SFF discourse, using her knowledge of (and beef with) works and writers that have gone before to expand and advance the arguments and preoccupations of science fiction as a literature. There’s even a nod to Ursula Le Guin’s 2014 National Book Award speech about the divine right of kings.

This kind of homage can only be fully successful if the newer writer is technically and creatively the equal of her predecessors. Hurley is all of that and then some. Politically astute, expertly handled and a damn fine read, The Light Brigade is fully deserving of its place on the Clarke Award shortlist, and sets the standard for military science fiction for years to come.

Weird Wednesdays #7: Rendezvous with Rama

The crab showed no reaction whatsoever, nor did it slacken its pace. Ignoring Jimmy completely, it walked straight past him and headed purposefully into the south. Feeling extremely foolish, the acting representative of Homo sapiens watched his First Contact stride away across the Raman plain, totally indifferent to his presence.

He had seldom been so humiliated in his life. Then Jimmy’s sense of humour came to his rescue. After all, it was no great matter to have been ignored by an animated garbage truck. It would have been worse if it had greeted him as a long-lost brother… (Arthur C. Clarke, Rendezvous with Rama.)

After my less than satisfactory experience with The Last Astronaut, I decided it might be interesting to revisit what I took to be that novel’s originating influence. I was curious to see not only how well the older book fared by comparison (I took comfort from the fact that it could hardly be worse) but also how well it stood up as a novel at a distance of forty-plus years since its publication. I was pretty sure I had read Arthur C. Clarke’s Rendezvous with Rama during my late teens, along with a shipload other other classic science fiction both of that period and earlier, though I had almost literally no memory of it aside from the basic premise: an unknown object is detected entering the solar system, a team of astronauts are sent up to investigate. I hadn’t read any Clarke for decades anyway, so this rereading promised to be fascinating on several levels.

It is 2131, and humanity has founded settlements on several of the other planets in our solar system as well as their moons. When an interstellar object is detected beyond the orbit of Jupiter, satellite images reveal that it is not an asteroid, as previously imagined, but a perfectly cylindrical vessel, some fifty kilometres in length and clearly alien in origin. The unidentified craft is named Rama, after the Hindu god, and a party of astronauts leave Earth on a mission to discover what kind of threat – or otherwise – it might pose to human civilization. The Endeavour is commanded by William Norton, who in matters of personal integrity and exploratory zeal identifies strongly with the long-dead captain of his own ship’s much older namesake.

On entering Rama, the crew of the Endeavour are met with a series of marvels and mysteries that defy human understanding. They know their time on Rama is limited – the vessel will soon pass too close to the sun for the Endeavour to continue safely with its mission. Gathering as much information as they can, they must also contend with the increasingly hostile rhetoric of representatives from the planetary settlement on Mercury. The Hermians believe themselves to be at particular risk from Rama, and given the fact that the vessel’s intentions cannot be verified, they are minded to shoot first and ask questions later.

I felt certain The Last Astronaut had taken inspiration from Rama. I was unprepared for quite how much. The narrative trajectory of TLA follows that of Rama pretty much identically: the long and exhausting climb down into the vessel, the discovery of a breathable atmosphere, the melting ice, the gradual awakening of native life forms – everything, right down to the captains of both missions being the same age. Intentional homage or unpardonable laziness? I don’t know and frankly, aside from a feeling of mild to middling outrage on Clarke’s behalf, I don’t even care that much. If The Last Astronaut were a better book, these ‘coincidences’ might matter more. As things stand, The Last Astronaut is a disposable potboiler, while Rendezvous with Rama is deservedly a classic of Western science fiction. No argument over who wins this particular battle of the BDOs.

One embarks on reading older science fiction novels braced for an onslaught of square-jawed heroes and unpalatable opinions, but aside from one highly unfortunate likening of a crew member to a monkey, and one ridiculous and totally uncalled-for meditation on the motion of women’s breasts in zero gravity, Clarke does pretty well. He is consciously progressive in his treatment of sexuality – homosexual and polyamorous relationships are seen as normal in his 2100s – and women on board the Endeavour (the odd lapse into innuendo aside) enjoy not only equal status, but equal respect. In a particularly notable sequence, Sergeant Ruby Barnes, a master mariner, is granted control of the mission when members of the crew are suddenly threatened by an enormous tidal wave:

She’s magnificent, thought the Commander – obviously enjoying every minute, like a Viking warrior going into battle.

Not a hint of gendered language in sight, with Norton readily deferring to Barnes’s greater expertise. It is Ruby who makes the decisions here, proving how capable Clarke was of imagining women in positions of command. I also liked Clarke’s treatment of religious faith. One of the Endeavour’s crew members is a devout member of the Church of Christ Cosmonaut (Jesus was a spaceman, basically). Whilst Norton does not share his beliefs, he does not belittle them either; rather, he takes particular note of this crewperson’s integrity, commitment and logical approach in trusting them to undertake a crucially important and potentially hazardous manoeuvre at a critical time.

Just as impressive is the novel’s overall attitude towards alien life. The concept of the alien as hostile and/or disposable has become so much the norm within Hollywoodised media that as an audience we have become more or less inured to it. In The Last Astronaut, the wonders of 21 are ultimately of no account when set against the terrifying threat to Earth the vessel poses, a threat that must be destroyed – with enormous weapons – as noisily as possible. (And yes, if monstrous megaworms really were about to eat the planet then I’d be first to press the button, but it is important to remember that this is fiction and authors have choices.)

The life forms encountered in Rama are not only imaginatively drawn, they are also notable in that Clarke makes a proper attempt to describe creatures that are alien without being monstrous. The attitude of the crew towards these beings is also significantly refreshing. Even Jimmy Pak, ‘a man of action, not introspection,’ feels guilt over his purloining of a botanical specimen, and Norton is determined they do nothing to harm the Raman ‘spiders’ that invade their camp:

Training was one thing, reality another; and no one could be sure that the ancient, human instincts of self-preservation would not take over in an emergency. Yet it was essential to give every entity they encountered in Rama the benefit of the doubt, up to the last possible minute – and even beyond.

Commander Norton did not want to be remembered by history as the man who started the first interplanetary war.

What a relief and a delight, to travel with a crew whose first instinct is to observe rather than to interfere or destroy.. That the tripedal spiders and other ‘biots’ are allowed to remain essentially a mystery is also to Clarke’s credit. Rama is vast and time is short. At least for now, the secrets of this alien civilization must remain unknowable, a tactic that renders them immortal and endlessly alluring. The novel’s penultimate sequence, in which the crew of the Endeavour are briefly caught in the wake of this vast alien structure as it prepares to take on fuel for its onward journey, has a poetry and a grandeur that reduced me to tears.

It was dropping out of the Ecliptic, down into the southern sky, far below the plane in which all the planets move. Though that, surely, could not be its ultimate goal, it was aimed squarely at the Greater Magellanic Cloud, and the lonely gulfs beyond the Milky Way.

Rendezvous with Rama earns its classic status not just through its expert deployment of classic tropes but in its conscious invocation of classical archetypes. Clarke’s novel is an Odyssey, a hero’s journey in which the hero is Rama itself as much as Norton. The tests and trials we encounter along the way are provided not by hydra or sirens but by physics and maths, while the end of the journey transcends anything so simple as ‘closure’ precisely because the central mystery remains unsolved.

There will be those who argue that Rama is unsatisfactory as a novel through being more or less plotless; for me, the book’s imaginative reach, its stylistic economy, its ability to inspire debate makes that irrelevant.

We could have a long debate over how The Last Astronaut’s mirror-likeness to Rama might be justified or defined. It could be argued, for example, that Wellington’s novel is actually intended to be an anti-Rama – a deliberate examination of how the story might have played out had the alien vessel been actively hostile. I would counter that for such a strategy to be successful, The Last Astronaut would have to be Rama’s equal in terms of literary achievement. What is beyond doubt is that the quality of Clarke’s writing – marked by age in places yes, but always cogent, cleanly descriptive, economical and stylish – raises his novel to a level Wellington’s never approaches. Eschewing cheap thrills, Rendezvous with Rama is characterised throughout by that philosophical stateliness, that sense of rapt idealism and thirst for knowledge that has helped to define science fiction as a mode of literature.

Weird Wednesdays #6/Clarke Award #2: The Last Astronaut by David Wellington

When I was in my young teens, I borrowed a novel from my local library entitled Journey to Jupiter. I had never heard of the author – Hugh Walters – and did not yet know that Journey to Jupiter was the eighth novel in a series recounting the adventures of Chris Godfrey and comrades, a team of astronauts working under the auspices of the (fictional) United Nations Exploration Agency, or UNEXA. I took the book and its characters to my heart more or less immediately, and over the course of the next year or so I burned through the rest of the series, revisiting my favourite volumes multiple times.

Hugh Walters became a science fiction writer by accident. Born Walter Llewellyn Hughes, he once said in a newspaper interview that he chose to write under a pseudonym because he was afraid writing science fiction might cause his friends and colleagues in the business community to take him less seriously. A keen amateur astronomer, Walters was asked to give a talk on space exploration for his hometown rotary club. His lecture was so well received he was invited to repeat it, this time for a local library as part of a week-long festival of science fiction. As preparation for the event, Walters read a number of recently published science fiction novels and found them disappointing. He felt that American science fiction writers especially were not sufficiently engaged with actual science, leaning instead towards the kind of pulp sensationalism that gave science fiction a bad name. Walters felt instinctively that science fiction should entertain, but that it should also educate. With ideals similar to those of the writers and producers of the first Doctor Who adventures, Walters wanted his books to inspire young people, to make them interested and passionate about science in the way he was himself.

For the first fifty or so pages of The Last Astronaut, I believed the book I was reading might have been conceived with a similar purpose. In considering this year’s Clarke Award shortlist, one of my aims has been to ask myself why each individual title has been selected, why, in the minds of the judges, the book stands out. My initial impression of The Last Astronaut was that it had been chosen as an example of the kind of space fiction that draws so many fans into the genre: a story that generates the excitement we remember from our first encounters with SF, with the added intention of exploring a speculative idea from a scientific standpoint. I get it, I thought. The Last Astronaut is like The Martian, with added aliens.

Reader, I was mistaken. And I’m sad about that.  

The Last Astronaut is set in 2065. Following the catastrophic failure of the first manned mission to Mars twenty years earlier, NASA has been defunded, leaving the exploration and exploitation of space to private enterprises. The beginning of our narrative sees an employee of one of the hungriest and most successful space corporations, KSpace, jumping ship to a NASA that, though almost defunct, still retains the framework of its earlier idealism. Sunny Stevens is an astrophysicist who always wanted to be an astronaut, and he has made a once-in-a-lifetime discovery: a body previously identified as an asteroid is decelerating, which means it must be moving under its own power. If asteroid 21/2054D1 is not in fact an asteroid, but an alien spacecraft, the implications are seismic. Stevens wants to make a deal – his information and expertise for a place on the team. With ‘21’ clearly headed for Earth, NASA chief Roy McAllister, now in his seventies, has a problem: action is clearly needed, but there are no astronauts qualified to take it. NASA’s only option is to make the best of what they have.

And so our rag-tag team of spacefarers is duly assembled. Sally Jansen previously captained the Orion 6 Mars mission and is the only one of the four with spaceflight experience. Still traumatised by the death of a colleague on that earlier mission, she believes she has something extra to prove in commanding this new one. In theory, Sunny Stevens knows everything there is to know about being an astronaut – but it is all theory. Parminder Rao is an astrobiologist, still young and misty-eyed at the thought of being the first to make contact with alien life. Windsor Hawkins is ex-military, more recently an expert in the art of tracking and capturing spy satellites. He is there to represent the interests of the US Defense Department, and if necessary to take command if things get out of hand.

It doesn’t take an Einstein to guess that’s exactly what things are going to do, and rapidly. Unbeknown to our heroes, a rival mission has launched and overtaken theirs – if there is anything of value to be gained from the incoming aliens, KSpace mean to be the first to seal the deal. As the Orion 7 approaches 21, the crew’s attempts to communicate with the KSpacers’ vessel the Wanderer return a negative. Anxious that they might be in trouble, Sally jets across to the Wanderer to investigate more closely. On boarding the craft, she finds no one at home. She can only assume the rival crew have decided to gain a headstart in exploring the alien ship. With memories of her first disastrous captaincy still fresh in her mind, she is determined to head off in pursuit and, if necessary, rescue.

In its outline and premise, the Last Astronaut has a great deal in common with Arthur C. Clarke’s 1973 novel Rendezvouz with Rama, although in the way it unfolds it reminded me equally of Jules Verne’s 1864 classic Journey to the Centre of the Earth. Both are noble examples to follow, and thus it is all the more dispiriting to discover that The Last Astronaut has neither the plainspoken competence of the Clarke, nor the timeless elegance of the Verne. In terms of both narrative plausibility and technical expertise, Wellington’s updated version reads like the novelisation of an inferior commercial genre movie we happened to see five years ago and didn’t much like.  

Fiction is fiction, and whilst it would seem churlish to hold The Last Astronaut too stringently to account for being factually improbable, the subgenre of exploratory science fiction to which this novel owes its allegiance depends on at least an appearance of verisimilitude. Novels like Kim Stanley Robinson’s Aurora or the Mars trilogy, for example – or indeed a film like Gravity – gain much of their effect through reminding us that space exploration is painstaking, hazardous, and often repetitive work, that its thrills are hard won, dependent on planning and strict adherence to scientific protocols. Indeed such close observation of truth is part of the attraction of this kind of fiction. Yet those with only the vaguest awareness of scientific etiquette will quickly come to the conclusion that what transpires on board Orion 7 is pretty much codswallop – not because the astronauts are chasing UFOs, but because their methods and decisions are farcical from the beginning. The crew leave the Orion 7 ‘parked’ just 2 kilometers from where 21 is in orbit when they have no idea what the object is, what danger it might pose. Sally Jansen undertakes an unauthorised EVA then boards the Wanderer without a clue of what might have happened there. Stevens pilots the Orion closer to the Wanderer when he knows there is a malignant alien life form on board, and so on. It is all so tiresome, the kind of plotting that occurs when the author needs something to happen, but cannot find an organic, realistic-seeming way of progressing the action. Instead, characters are moved around like puppets, or like pieces on a game board.

Read any astronaut’s memoirs and you will be in no doubt that the actions of the Orion crew are about as far from anything resembling reality as you could get. What we have instead is a plot that appears to be strung together from a series of movie clichés. Here is the scene from Interstellar in which Michael Caine reveals that NASA never really died, it just went into hiding. Here is the scene from Alien where Ripley warns against bringing the infected Kane back on board the Nostromo only to have her veto countermanded. The big reveal recalls Sam Neill’s defection to the dark side in Event Horizon (‘I don’t need eyes where I’m going.’) and there is even a rehash of a classic scene from Indiana Jones – you’ll recognise it when you come to it. Windsor Hawkins plays the ubiquitous power-mad egotist with the ‘secret’ Chekhov’s gun in his pocket, ready to be used as the catalyst for the final confrontation. The tediously violent showdown-as-climax as per every derivative, hackneyed, lazy Hollywood screenplay you’ve ever seen is the final letdown. Wellington couldn’t resist the duct tape, either, or the robot pal. Add a dash of Final Girl Theory to complete the recipe.

Such reliance on overripe material does not end with the plotting. A lot of argument has been expended on the language of science fiction and what is the most appropriate mode of expression for a literature of ideas. Personally I would argue there is no right way to write science fiction; the dense rococo of Catherynne Valente is as fit for purpose as the visionary optimism of Arthur Clarke, the social realism of Le Guin, the factualism of Stan Robinson or the modernist and post-modernist approaches of Ballard and Gibson. What can never work – in any mode of literature – is the language of cliché. Thus in The Last Astronaut you have to put up with a lot of stuff like this:

It was the first time the two of them had been alone since they’d danced in the air, since the day Wanderer blew right past them. It was the first time she’d had to think about what being alone with him meant…

Rao knew what she wanted from him. She also knew she was very, very good at controlling her impulses when she needed to focus. Most of the time.

She reached under the collapsible shower unit for a bolt that had floated away from her. When she came back up, Stevens put his hands on her shoulders. He leaned in close to kiss her neck. She’d kind of been expecting that, so she stiffened up.

‘Hey,’ he said. ‘Was that… OK?’

Rao laughed. ‘It was… extremely OK. Honestly,’ she said. ‘But Sunny – we’re working…You must be as excited to meet the aliens as I am, don’t lie.’

‘I’m excited about a lot of things,’ he said… He put his mouth very close to her ear. ‘Are you seriously going to tell me you don’t want to be the first person to have sex in space?’

And this:

The interior walls were covered in thin padding with a white vinyl covering, and back near the airlock leading to the command module, someone had drawn on the padding with a red pen. At first she thought it was a note – maybe left behind by a desperate crew in case anyone ever found their abandoned ship. She steeled herself to read the last words of a dying astronaut.

Then she saw there were no words. Just crude drawings of a woman with exceptionally large breasts, and next to her a giant penis with hairy testicles.

It’s all very ‘I Lost My Heart to a Starship Trooper’ (if this reference passes you by, you’d be advised to keep it that way), steeped in the affectless banter that has become the accepted currency of Hollywood sci-fi. The writer has made little attempt to imagine what real people and more specifically real astronauts might say in these circumstances; he relies instead on pre-imagined scenarios, pre-imagined dialogue of the kind spoken not by human beings under stress but by actors playing roles.

Similarly, the main body of the text suffers from an overabundance of ‘dead’ words – adverbs and qualifiers that serve no purpose except to leave the prose feeling clogged and overburdened with waffle. Writers are drawn to this manner of expression because they think it adds realism and immediacy. That certain words and phrases feature frequently in spoken English should act as both an instruction and a warning: used sparingly in colloquial dialogue they can be effective, used in narrative prose they are a menace to society. Most writers’ first drafts are littered with spare verys and actuallys – that’s how we talk and think, especially when we’re working out a new idea. Part of the work of the second draft is to weed them out. Here’s a brief extract from The Last Astronaut:

When NASA actually answered his message, he’d basically just walked out the door. He’d never actually expected this to happen, and he hadn’t thought to prepare. Now it was time to make an actual decision. He could still walk away – say he was sorry, but he’d made a mistake. Take the train all night to get home and go to bed and pretend he’d never even thought of this crazy plan.  Go back to work tomorrow at the Hive and hope nobody was monitoring his email.  

And here’s how I would redraft it:

He hadn’t expected a reply to his message, and so when NASA called him he left immediately and without preparation. Now he had to decide. He could still walk away, say he was sorry, that he’d made a mistake. He could get back on the train, fall into bed then go to work at the Hive the following morning as if nothing had happened. Hope no one was monitoring his email. Pretend he’d never thought of this crazy plan.  

This new version conveys the same information, but with greater economy and precision. Just cutting those three actuallys and the basically would leave the passage neater and cleaner. Apply this simple method to the text as a whole and even if you made no other material changes you’d have a better book.

Writing is, as we all know, the devil, and it would be unfair of me to suggest that The Last Astronaut has no redeeming features, or that it is an entirely negative reading experience. As I suggested above, my initial encounter with it reminded me pleasurably of my own early forays into the genre: the thrill of adventure, the sense that anything was possible, the intimation that something marvellous and possibly dangerous was about to happen. The book reminded me of how exciting science fiction can be, while the pace of action kept me hooked and entertained. I mentioned in an earlier post how quickly I become invested in stories, and in spite of my mounting annoyance at the novel’s technical shortcomings, I still wanted to know what happened. I would have kept reading even if I hadn’t committed myself to writing this essay.

I would also add that The Last Astronaut does make some gestures towards the science fictional principle of conceptual breakthrough. There are several key moments in the novel where the parameters shift, where our understanding of what is happening becomes radically altered. It is interesting to note that these are also the moments when Wellington’s imagination becomes more fully engaged. In his descriptions of the interior of 21 there is passion, finally, and a sense of wonder, a clearer, more precise language that more adequately serves the novel’s key ideas:

After the continuous darkness of 21, the flare’s light was blinding and Rao had to look away. When she dared to lift her head again she saw it, a red comet blazing across the air above them. For a second, just a second, she could see for kilometers, she could see the arcing walls of 21, the walls of the drum curving up and away from her, walls covered in water dotted with the last scraps of ice. She saw all the bubble mounds and hand-trees and arches, the vast domes and wells and things she couldn’t describe, saw just how much of this dark lake had come to life. She saw, directly above her, the roof of the drum, saw hand-trees up there that must be kilometers tall, saw their slender fingers twitch and curl up. She saw the arches rising over her head, hundreds of them, arches growing from the curves of other arches like the staircases in an Escher painting. The air over her head was crisscrossed by a network that branched and rebranched very much as the tendrils ramified. A pale scaffolding that crossed from one side of the drum to the other.

If only Wellington had trusted his own resources more; freed from the hackneyed dialogue, the dodgy romance plot, the clumsy in-paragraph point-of-view shifts, the (God help us but at least they’re short) dream sequences, how much truer to its inspirations this novel might have been.

Why does this matter, I hear you asking. Why am I expending so much time and energy in excavating the perceived faults of a novel for which I am and never was the intended audience? Because The Last Astronaut is on the shortlist for the Clarke Award of course, and any proper examination and evaluation of that shortlist should mean subjecting the book to the level of critical scrutiny one would expect from an award jury.

Having concluded my critical examination of The Last Astronaut, I am forced to admit that I cannot understand the process by which the Clarke jury came to select it as one of the six best science fiction novels of 2019. The book is derivative, generic, reliant on stereotypes and awash in cliché. The Big Dumb Object novel is an honourable tradition within science fiction, but taken as an example of it The Last Astronaut does not demonstrate any notable qualities of rigour or originality. Thus for it to merit inclusion on the Clarke shortlist, it would need to showcase some other arbiter of excellence – linguistic dexterity perhaps, or formal innovation. Sadly, as we have seen, it possesses neither. The only reason I can imagine for its presence here is that one or other of the judges really, really enjoyed reading it. If this were a fan award, then fair enough. But it isn’t, and it’s not. The Clarke deserves better.

Weird Wednesdays #5: China Mountain Zhang

“I never know what’s going on. Even when I’m in the middle of some secret, like a surprise anniversary party, or when I was at the scene of the event people talk about years later, I missed stuff and other people drew different conclusions than I did. I can’t imagine that other people really know how the government works. And if our government is beyond understanding, surely the Galactic Empire is beyond understanding. And I can’t believe that one evil genius has a clear understanding because I’ve been a peon in a big company and lord knows we were never doing what the brass thought we were doing.”

(Maureen F. McHugh ‘The Anti SF Novel’)

In considering the nature and essence of science fiction, there is one conundrum I return to more than any other: what is it that defines science fiction as a literary form, and how does it differ from other literary forms, if at all?

I remember when I was looking back over the experience of chairing the Clarke shadow jury in 2018, I made a personal resolution to try and avoid using the terms ‘literary SF’ and ‘genre SF’ as a way of distinguishing between science fiction published and reviewed as genre fiction and science fiction that happened to be put out by a mainstream literary imprint. I felt at the time and still feel that such distinctions tend to be arbitrary, a convenient way of pigeonholing books and authors without contributing anything substantive to the discussion.

But I’ve been looking at this question again in recent weeks, wondering whether this decades-long obsession within SF circles with how a book is published and presented might not be a clumsy but nonetheless valid attempt to grapple with more interesting questions. I have often had the feeling myself, without being able to properly quantify it, that the most dynamic and satisfying science fiction of all is the work of writers who pay attention to literary values yes, but who come from within the genre, who write science fiction because they believe it is a unique mode of literary expression and one they are committed to as a project. Writers who read science fiction and whose science fictional sensibility – that slippery concept – is on a par with their literary ambitions.

Of course, any attempt to name names is going to vary from reader to reader, and is likely to be as contentious as the accompanying insinuation that science fiction written from outside the genre is ‘not real SF’, which leaves us back where we started. Far more useful to try and identify the specifics of what makes the best science fiction so powerful, so galvanising and so resonant. This week and with this blog post in mind, I reread Joanna Russ’s 1975 essay ‘Towards an Aesthetic of Science Fiction‘. I found it fascinating, provocative and, like all the best essays, a challenge to any preconceived notions I might have had.

Science fiction, like medieval painting, addresses itself to the mind, not the eye. We are not presented with a representation of what we know to be true through direct experience; rather we are given what we know to be true through other means—or in the case of science fiction, what we know to be at least possible. Thus the science fiction writer can portray Jupiter as easily as the medieval painter can portray Heaven; neither of them has been there, but that doesn’t matter. To turn from other modern fiction to science fiction is oddly like turning from Renaissance painting with all the flesh and foreshortening to the clarity and luminousness of painters who paint ideas. For this reason, science fiction, like much medieval art, can deal with transcendental events.

Russ’s thesis, that science fiction is by its nature a didactic form of literature that concerns itself with objective phenomena rather than subjective states, is one that immediately recalls that Ted Chiang quote about sense of wonder and conceptual breakthrough I alluded to the other week. It is a contention I have always resisted up until now, tending instead towards the conviction that if science fiction is to be successful as literature, it must adhere to the same standards as literary fiction – a thought-trap Russ identifies immediately in her ironic and mischievous way. I find Russ’s comparison of science fiction with Mediaeval painting an illuminating and pertinent one. As a writer and critic in sympathy with the Ballardian precept of allying science fiction with modernism, I also find it easier to get on board with as the parallels between Mediaeval art and Modernist art, the way they have more in common with each other than with the Enlightenment, Romantic and Social-Realist schools that are sandwiched between them, are self evident and fascinating.

Moreover, there is no doubt that I too have often felt that vague frustration on being confronted with a work that should, according to my own precepts and by virtue of its standard of achievement at the sentence level, be successful as science fiction, and yet feels somehow muffled and devoid of substance, lacking not only in conceptual breakthrough but unable or unwilling to commit to the very concept of conceptual breakthrough as a necessary element.

I have found trouble in defining what is wrong with it, and of course there is nothing wrong with it, except to say that it is not really science fiction. Rather, it is using the materials of science fiction in pursuit of a different goal. There is nothing wrong with that, either – but it is interesting, at least to me, to try and get to grips with these distinctions.

Reading Russ’s essay again (and admiring it tremendously) I am bound to admit that the works of science fiction that best succeed and best endure do fulfil her strictures, as they do Chiang’s – Russ and Chiang are saying the same thing using different words. But is it also true, as Russ suggests, that science fiction literature requires a different form of criticism from mainstream literature? That the tools and assumptions we bring to the analysis of a work by Philip Roth are simply not suited to the task of interpreting a novel by John Crowley, or John Wyndham? (The American critic Harold Bloom famously argued that science fiction was ‘not literature’ and therefore could not be criticised according to literary precepts. He was forced to reconsider his position when confronted by the works of Ursula Le Guin and Crowley himself, whose novel Little, Big, he later named as a masterpiece.)

Drawing this loop even tighter, do I as a critic need to rethink my approach? Have I been missing the point up till now, judging texts according to parameters that should not be applied to them, whilst failing to address the work on its own terms?

Thinking intensively about these matters over several days, I have come to the conclusion that the most valid approach for me in writing about science fiction is one that unites the opposed positions of Russ and Bloom, that looks at the work as text, whilst acknowledging the aims of science fiction in terms of underlying conceit and conceptual breakthrough. Look at it harder, in other words. Ask what a book is doing as well as how it does it. It is true that the best works of science fiction are as satisfying as any in the whole of literature. But is it at least possible – and yes, I think it is – that they satisfy differently?

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Maureen McHugh’s 1992 novel China Mountain Zhang won the Tiptree Award and the Locus Award, and was shortlisted for both the Hugo and the Nebula.. With themes of empire and colonialism still fresh in my mind, I thought now would be a good time to read this book finally, that it might serve as an interesting point of comparison with A Memory Called Empire, both in and of itself and in the matter of its overall approach to science fiction. How right I was.

Surname: Zhang. Given name: Zhong Shan. China Mountain Zhang. My foolish mother. It’s so clearly a huaqiao name, like naming someone Vladimir Lenin Smith or Karl Marx Johnson. Zhong Shan, better known in the West as Sun Yat-sen, one of the early leaders of the great revolution in China, back in the first days, the days of virtue. The man who held up the sky like a mountain. Irony.

But better that than Rafael Luis.

Zhang is an engineer, living in a New York that is now the capital of a revolutionary socialist United States. China has become the dominant power, both politically and economically, with a standard of living and scientific outlook years in advance of the rest of the world. For an American-Born Chinese engineer like Zhang, the ultimate goal is to study in China, a sought-after privilege that would enable him to take his pick of jobs and effectively be set up for life. Zhang is talented and, when he wants to be, hard working, but he faces several obstacles. Firstly, he is mixed-race, his Chinese appearance effected through a gene-splicing technique that is now illegal. Secondly, Zhang is gay – in a time and place where homosexuality is illegal and punishable with the death penalty. Thirdly, through no direct fault of his own, he has managed to insult his boss and get fired from his job. With the career path he was set on suddenly closed off to him, Zhang finds himself back at the bottom of the pile, with a mountain to climb.

Zhang would not describe himself as a political animal, yet neither would he describe himself as a dissident. His aim in life is simply to live, to slip between the cracks of a state machine that views difference less as opportunity than as a problem to be solved. With his own innate talent for problem-solving, Zhang loves the theoretical and mechanical structures of engineering, but he is not sure yet what he should do with this passion, what kind of life he wants to lead. The novel follows Zhang through the next ten years and through a variety of settings as he works his way back up the professional ladder and finds ways of coming to terms with his personal predicament. Interspersed with Zhang’s chapters, we spend time in the company of others who come into contact with him, some without knowing anything about him other than his name: a kite-flier named Angel, a young woman who encounters prejudice because of her looks, an ex-army officer who is now part of a commune on Mars. a refugee from the resettlement camps of the American desert corridor:

I never pictured Mars like this – I grew up in a frontier town on the edge of the corridor, my daddy was a scrap prospector, not a farmer but there were a lot of farmers and so I had an idea of what frontier farming was like. Some years they got crops, some years the People’s Volunteers brought drinking water into town in trucks and when I was in senior middle school I used to go get water for my mother. We had two big fifty-liter containers that we put in the back of an old three-wheel bike. I’d get them filled and then have to stand on the pedals to get the bike to go anywhere. I wanted to join the PV, but after I finished school and married Geri there were too many applicants. Then the party said the drive to reduce carbon dioxide was working. That the global temperature was falling, and it would be possible to resettle the corridor… Three degrees, and they’ll get back to temperature levels in the 1900s and it’ll rain in Idaho and across north central Africa and who knows, maybe it’ll rain carp in Beijing, and flowers will bloom in the Antarctic, but Geri still died and Theresa spent half of her childhood in resettlement camps.

There have been readers who argue that China Mountain Zhang does not really have a plot. For me, that is part of the beauty of it. If science fiction satisfies differently, then mosaic novels, also, satisfy differently, allowing the author to reveal a world, and a set of characters as they relate to one another within that world, at a speed and with a logic more congruent with lived reality. The ‘plot’ of China Mountain Zhang is the story arc of ten years in Zhang’s lived reality, with all the setbacks and revelations and unexpected sub plots that result when characters and situations interact. It is easy to imagine China Mountain Zhang as a TV series, with individual episodes spent with different characters living their own stories, the connections between them only becoming apparent over time.

And it does not stop there. One of my chief complaints about A Memory Called Empire is that the world – the empire – it is set in is so lacking in physical texture it never feels real. With the forward-thrust of the plot allowed to dominate, the lived reality of Teixcalaan remains out of reach. The empire of China Mountain Zhang, by contrast, feels fascinatingly, disconcertingly real, the characters, scenarios and technological advances so convincing the novel reads almost as if it were mimetic fiction. McHugh’s novel is a masterclass in worldbuilding, because that worldbuilding is so thoroughly a part of the narrative it is pretty much invisible.

But what lifts this book beyond the realm of the well imagined, alternate-world ‘slice of life’ novel and properly into the realm of science fiction is its preoccupation with systems of engineering – mechanical, social and political. ‘Science fiction is the only modern literature to take work as its central and characteristic concern’, Russ says in ‘Towards an Aesthetic of Science Fiction’. This position is reiterated by McHugh herself in her own essay ‘The Anti SF Novel’, in which she describes how aspects of the novel that are commonly viewed as background through being so familiar – technology, politics, society, philosophy – in the case of the science fiction novel can and often must step forward into the foreground to become the novel’s true subject. Thus we follow Zhang to Baffin Island and then to China, where he studies Daoist engineering, a discipline that is almost as much an art form as it is a science.

Once again, McHugh’s skill in imagining and clarity in explaining are such that Zhang’s struggles to gain mastery over his talent prove even more compelling than the colourful and occasionally tragic vacillations of his private life. Where else but in a work of science fiction could a discourse on engineering and Marxist dialectics be described as the climax of the novel? And yet, we have by this time become so invested in this character and his world, so attuned to McHugh’s skill as a storyteller that Zhang’s lecture on history and chaos has both power and structural significance, drawing the threads of the novel together to form an exquisitely executed argument that – in just half a dozen pages – both describes the work’s narrative structure and tells us, with beautiful clarity, what the book is about:

“History is also a complex system. It is not random, but it is non-linear. Marx’s predictions were based on the assumption that history is a linear system, and using those assumptions he predicted the future. But if weather is a complex system, it seems reasonable to assume that history is also a complex system. History is sensitive dependent on initial conditions. You cannot predict the future.”

There is a sigh in the classroom. I have said what everybody knows but no one says. It is in the room, hanging.

Marx was wrong.

Just as Zhang himself is a mass of contradictions and ambiguities, so China Mountain Zhang as a novel is politically pragmatic, preferring to imagine, describe, extrapolate and posit rather than propagandise in any direction, a quality, I need hardly add, that is vastly to its credit. The language of the novel is detailed and descriptive – the chapter set on Baffin Island is a highlight in this regard – whilst remaining clear, declarative, and never self-indulgent. In this it mirrors McHugh’s own apparent fascination with language as system, with the novel’s exploration of the differences between different language systems boldly in accordance with the science fictional conceit of conceptual breakthrough. For someone such as myself, with a pronounced fondness for linguistics in fiction, this aspect of the novel forms a particular highlight.

Put simply, China Mountain Zhang is a science fiction masterpiece and a joy to read. Moreover, it demonstrates perfectly how the language of science fiction does not need to ape the language or preoccupations of mainstream literary fiction to maintain equality with it in terms of – again, a slippery concept – literary worth. Science fiction has its own preoccupations; science fiction that fully succeeds will be adept in the use of language that best explores them. Good writing is itself a skill, a tool, a conceptual breakthrough. Paying attention to how that skill is employed is itself an inseparable part of writing good science fiction.

Weird Wednesdays #4/Clarke Award #1: A Memory Called Empire by Arkady Martine

Early on in lockdown and following the splendid BBC documentary timed to coincide with the release of the third volume in her Thomas Cromwell trilogy, Chris and I decided to watch the TV adaptation of Hilary Mantel’s Wolf Hall, which we had missed the first time around and streaming on iPlayer. Mark Rylance’s superb portrayal of Cromwell, together with a wonderful score, the most incredible set designs and costuming and all round attention to detail made Wolf Hall one of my standout small screen experiences of the year so far. The care that had been lavished on this production and above all a deep love and understanding of the source material was evident in every frame and I was only sorry I hadn’t got round to watching it sooner. I enthused about the series to my mother (oh yes, and Morse Suppers are back!) encouraging her to get into it if only for Rylance.

“I don’t think so,” she said, once I’d finished rhapsodising. “All those people in cloaks and big dresses, politicking and then having their heads cut off. Not for me.”

I could have gone on about how unfair a judgement that was on the magnificence of what had been achieved, but then, I realised, I couldn’t exactly tell her she was wrong, either. As a baseline summary, hers was actually pretty fair, one that caused me to consider the nature and purpose of historical fiction more generally and how closely allied that genre is with space opera, a comparison that sounds unlikely but that becomes more resonant the more I think about it.

As Jonathan Strahan said on a recent episode of The Coode Street Podcast (do listen, it’s great), ‘any stirring space opera adventure is by its nature epic fantasy,’ and for me at least, looking at space opera through the lens of historical fiction has come to seem far more apposite and useful than trying to interrogate it as science fiction. The paraphernalia of most space opera – planet-spanning empires, faster-than-light travel, jump-gates, fleets of intergalactic battle-cruisers, sworn allegiances and deadly betrayals – is surely the stuff of fantasy by any other name, and as the most popular recent TV franchises demonstrate, this kind of epic fantasy draws much of its inspiration either directly from realworld history, or from the fiction derived from it. Being honest about this, rather than attempting to squeeze space opera inside an ill-fitting science fictional rationale, not only makes better sense in terms of writing criticism, it actually renders the genre more enjoyable, engaging and rewarding, as Strahan himself put it. Or at least it does for me.

The protagonist of Arkady Martine’s debut A Memory Called Empire is Mahit Dzmare. Mahit is a native of Lsel Station, the hollow bathysphere that is the population centre of the Lsel system, a small group of uninhabitable planets whose metallic ores form the main export and livelihood of the thirty thousand souls for whom Lsel Station is home. Lsel Station is a relatively young polity, its history spanning just fourteen generations. It is nonetheless proudly independent, and determined to preserve its integrity against the vast and ancient neighbouring empire of Teixcalaan. When Lsel Station’s ambassador to Teixcalaan stops communicating with home, Mahit is hastily dispatched to the City in his place. As a new and inexperienced negotiator, she must both seek to maintain the good diplomatic relations that have been established, whilst at the same time endeavouring to discover exactly what happened to her predecessor and what he had been planning. When Mahit learns that Yskandr Aghavn, the former ambassador, is dead, she quickly comes to suspect that he has been murdered.

Though fluent in Teixcalaanli and steeped in City culture and politics from a young age, Mahit is viewed by her Teixcalaanlizlim hosts as a barbarian. Largely incurious about Stationer culture, language and social mores, the Teixcalaanlizlim have until now remained ignorant of Lsel Station’s reliance on symbiosis to preserve their collective memory and body of knowledge. As Mahit takes up her position in the ambassador’s apartments, her hosts do not know that she carries within her an imago, a digital copy of her predecessor that allows her not only access to Yskandr’s memories, experience and knowledge, but also creates of the two of them a kind of joint entity, a person that is still entirely Mahit Dzmare whilst embodying the living spirit of Yskandr Aghavn. That Yskandr’s imago is fifteen years out of date, and therefore has no knowledge of why or how he came to be dead, provides an additional problem Mahit will have to navigate. With terrorist incidents and increasingly violent protests suddenly rife in the City, Lsel Station seems more at risk than ever of losing its independence, of being subsumed by an empire that views it as disposable.    

One of the complaints most commonly levelled at genre science fiction is that the proliferation of characters, combined with the ‘funny names’ and ‘unfamiliar technology’ that constitute its trappings makes it difficult to get to grips with unless you are a seasoned and practised reader of SF and fantasy. I am and always have been in two minds about this complaint. Yes, A Memory Called Empire does require a degree of concentration and commitment from the reader, especially at the outset – there is a lot to get to grips with, and quickly. Does it require more concentration than Wolf Hall though, or War and Peace, come to that? I’m not sure that it does. Martine helpfully provides a glossary of terms and character names – as Tolstoy provides a family tree at the opening of War and Peace – but as I was reading the book on Kindle I didn’t know it was there until I reached the end, by which time I was comfortably familiar with all the information it contained and so did not need it anyway.

I am under no illusion that many readers of mainstream literature would reject this book as ‘unreadable’ a couple of pages in. But are they any less closed-minded than readers of space opera who are unwilling to give James Joyce’s Ulysses a try on the grounds that it is ‘too difficult’? I’ve thought about this a lot, even written about it sometimes, and have broadly come to the conclusion that all readers have their comfort zones, many are unwilling to get out of them and most genres and modes of literature are ‘specialist’ to a degree. In order to determine how far a book is successful, or satisfying, we need to dig deeper. We need to look further than at the label that has been attached to it.

I have read a lot of Hilary Mantel (three of her contemporary novels as well as her memoir and her most recent short fiction collection), but I have not read the whole of the Wolf Hall trilogy. I have read Bring up the Bodies, because I thought it was important to get the sense of what these books were like and because I have always been fascinated by the power struggle that ensued around the rise and cataclysmic fall of Anne Boleyn. I found the book engaging and entertaining, full of intelligence and witty analysis, elegance personified. I also found it rather one-note, almost bland when compared for example with Beyond Black or Eight Months on Ghazzah Street. Mantel is one of my writing heroes, but I know I am something of an outlier in preferring her contemporary works to her Cromwellian magnum opus. I also know that this comes down to my personal preferences rather than any diminution of quality in Mantel’s work.

For the most part, I have always found this kind of reconstructive historical fiction – novels in which historically famous people are made to say things and think thoughts we cannot for the most part know they ever said or thought – difficult to get on board with. Reading Bring Up the Bodies, I kept thinking how much I’d love to get away from the royal palaces – compelling though the court intrigue is – and out into the provinces. How much I would have preferred to be reading a novel about a young woman in an English market town, learning to read and write against her stepfather’s wishes, becoming obsessed with the new queen maybe as the royal drama unfolded down in London. About the claims and counter-claims amongst the villagers and tradespeople as the rumour that Boleyn was a witch began to spread and take hold. Similarly, I wouldn’t now be overwhelmed with enthusiasm at the prospect of a novel about the occupants of No 10 Downing Street scrambling to conduct damage limitation strategy on the Barnard Castle fiasco – we have Tim Shipman for that. I would be more inclined to read about a nurse bringing up three kids on her own whilst working on the medical front line, her daughter worried about her university place amidst the cancellation of exams, her youngest son trying to mitigate his unspoken terror of the virus by incorporating it into the world of his favourite computer game.

I prefer close focus, intimate worlds, the armreach of history revealed through the handsbreadth of personal experience. I don’t want to watch an advert for the latest iteration of digital technology – I want to see how that technology affects individuals, here, on the ground.  

These preferences, I hope, go some way to explaining why I always get something of a sinking feeling around space opera. It is all too tidy, too forward-thrusting, too shallow. I remember having exactly the same feeling when I read Ann Leckie’s Ancillary Justice, and more recently Yoon Ha Lee’s Ninefox Gambit. In both cases I became mildly invested in the story – I find getting invested in stories remarkably easy – and even enjoyed my time spent in its world. But once I’d finished reading, that was that. As text, neither of these novels made much of an impression, and beyond a basic plot outline I could barely tell you now what actually went on in them.

This is not – and I want to stress this – for want of ideas or ambition on the part of the authors. What I find most admirable about the new space opera is the way in which a fresh generation of SF writers are using space opera actively to deconstruct and analyse aspects of our realworld politics, past and present, in ways not too dissimilar from what Mantel is doing in her Wolf Hall trilogy. There is a wealth of intellectual engagement in A Memory Called Empire, as Arkady Martine uses both her characters and her setting to examine the experience of colonised peoples, the relationship between the individual and the body politic, the social and cultural morality of assimilation. Much has already been written about these aspects of the novel, and I would encourage anyone reading this essay to also take a look at Catherine Baker’s excellent review at Strange Horizons for a view of the novel very different from my own.     

Because what I don’t get from A Memory Called Empire is any real depth. The characters have characteristics and yes, they are distinguishable from one another but they exist entirely in subservience to the plot. We have no idea what kind of upbringing either Mahit or Yskandr enjoyed on Lsel Station. We have no idea what Nine Adze was like at school. We don’t have a clue how His Brilliance the Emperor Six Direction likes to spend his downtime. The novel is all events: this happened, then this, then this, then this. And sadly it is the same with sense of place. Yes, we know that the City is rapturously beautiful around its centre with some slummy outer districts none of the tourists ever get to see. But the setting feels disappointingly generic, the blocked-in backdrop to a game, a hodge-podge of pre-used tropes (marbled halls, elegant formal gardens, super-highways linking one part of the City to another). What of the rest of the planet? What of the climate, the terrain? And again, how and where do ordinary people live when they’re not demonstrating in the streets either for or against the emperor incumbent?   

I would undoubtedly have found more tolerance for this lack of an emotional and geographical hinterland had a stronger attempt been made by Martine to create an alien culture and way of life I could genuinely believe in as alien. What I get instead is a world saturated with the assumptions, language, humour (oh so millennial) and even fannish in-jokes of the American demotic, twenty-first century variety. In other words, even the worldbuilding, which appears so inventive and richly textured at first glance, is thin, overly reliant on a readership already familiar with these kinds of milieux to fill in the gaps. For comparison, have a look at the solidly constructed, deeply imagined, bracingly tactile worldbuilding on display in Le Guin’s The Left Hand of Darkness, or the powerful, nerve-jangling testimony of Severian in Gene Wolfe’s The Shadow of th Torturer, and you’ll see what I mean.     

I did appreciate Martine’s decision to include short sections of ‘found texts’ from both Stationer and Teixcalaanli sources at the head of each chapter – I always love stuff like that, and it probably won’t come as any surprise to learn that the most interesting part of the novel for me is the role played by epic poetry in Teixcalaanli culture. The section near the end, in which Mahit helps her official liaison (and love interest) Three Seagrass to construct a poem that will also act as an encoded statement of resistance to the unfolding military coup, the way in which that poem goes viral and evolves its identity as it reaches more users – I liked this very much, indeed I would vastly have preferred it if the entire book had been about Mahit’s conflicted relationship with Teixcalaanli poetry and her parsing of its contradictions through scholarship. That, or her rejection of the imperial tradition as she begins to forge a new form of modernist poetry that is inalienably of Lsel Station.

I am always going to prefer Ulverton to Bring Up the Bodies. I am always going to prefer China Mountain Zhang to A Memory Called Empire. I am just that kind of reader, and writer. Whatchya gonna do?

In terms of its worthiness to be included on this year’s Clarke Award shortlist, I will say that I understand perfectly why this book has been selected. In the themes it addresses as well as the smart, progressive and action-filled manner in which it addresses them, A Memory Called Empire is a good example of contemporary space opera, one many of today’s readership will enjoy and feel passionately about. As a debut novel in this subgenre it is entertaining, enjoyably complex and professionally executed. Whether the novel is outstanding per se, and whether being a good example of something – a measure of where the field is at as opposed to where it might set its sights – is a good enough reason for choosing it as one of the six best science fiction novels of the year, will, as always, come down to the judgement and proclivities of individual readers.

Weird Wednesdays #3

First up this week comes Tim Maughan’s Infinite Detail, which I happened to be reading precisely now in an attempt to get ahead with my Clarke Award reading. What with the unusually long wait for this year’s submissions list, my ideas about what might be on the shortlist were uncharacteristically vague. My only solid hunch was Infinite Detail, and I was more than a little surprised to see it not just not make the cut but not even feature on the submissions list itself. That mystery was solved when someone kindly pointed out to me that there is currently no UK edition of Infinite Detail and so it is not eligible to be considered for the Clarke.

It seems counter-intuitive to me, to say the least, that a novel as British as Infinite Detail had to look to the USA to find its publishing home. There are some chapters (and beautifully executed they are, too) set in New York, but the bulk of the action and the whole sensibility of the novel are rooted in British culture, British politics and British social structures. Luckily, Infinite Detail is readily available to UK readers as a Kindle eBook, but even so, the idea that it will not be visible on bookshop shelves here does both the novel and its author a disservice, not to mention the incongruity of one of 2019’s most interesting SF novels being ineligible for what is arguably the world’s most respected and important juried science fiction award.

I am beginning to perceive a pattern here, though. There is a loose group – a new New Wave, if you like – of British writers whose work might best be described as the natural successor to the ‘mundane SF’ of the early 2000s. These writers are less interested in the widescreen formats of space opera, MilSF and interstellar travel, focusing instead on stories set mainly on Earth in a recognisable near-future, with an emphasis on contemporary politics and class inequalities, the impact of new technologies on ordinary lives. I would include within this group Maughan himself, from way back, but also Simon Ings, Matt Hill, Matthew de Abaitua, Carl Neville and James Smythe (whose 2014-Clarke-shortlisted The Machine stands as a key example of this kind of writing). I have been asking myself for a while now why it is that these writers are so much less visible than they ought to be, given the contemporary relevance and literary excellence of their output. Their work is (surely) right at the cutting edge of science fiction. It is using science fiction to engage directly with social and political questions, demonstrating SF as the radical mode of literature it has always been.

For genre publishing imprints not to acquire and promote this kind of science fiction seems short-sighted and again, counter-intuitive. These writers are important and talented and they deserve recognition. You could argue that it is in this brand of politically engaged, intellectually curious stripe of SF that the future of the genre lies. Especially in our current moment, audiences who look to science fiction for inspiration, information or even a warning about where future developments could take us are hungry for novels and stories that tread that uneven, liminal path between the present as it is experienced and the future as it might be. it seems ironic, to say the least, that both Maughan and Hill have seen their most recent work gain shortlist recognition in the USA, but not here at home.

Those who have been following Maughan’s career since his 2011 collection Paintwork, will find in his debut novel Infinite Detail everything they have been hoping for, and more. Set on his home turf of Bristol, Infinite Detail tells the intertwined stories of a number of individuals who find themselves present at a particularly brutal turning point in human history: the end of the internet. Incorporating story strands from immediately before and ten years after the crisis, one of the things I appreciated most about Maughan’s novel is that it refuses to take sides, concentrating its energies instead upon the human and environmental ramifications of an event that is viewed by some as catastrophe, by others as a new beginning. In the end – and Maughan is experienced and mature enough to know that the same could be said of most things – it is a bit of both. Infinite Detail is fast-paced without ever falling into the thriller trap, technologically articulate without descending into nerd-speak, intellectually rigorous whilst remaining accessible. What marks it out particularly though is its sense of place: the language, landscape and people of Bristol and especially their music are rendered with passion and that sense of familiarity that comes only through personal knowledge. More SF like this, please!

In one of those weird instances of reading synchronicity, my second book this week shares aspects of the first whilst seeming on the surface to be something completely different. Rupert Thomson’s Katherine Carlyle (2016) opens with its protagonist chucking her mobile into a river and leaving her laptop under a bridge, restored to its factory settings and labelled ‘free computer’. Kit is nineteen years old but for reasons that will become apparent she is also twenty-seven. Still grieving the loss of her mother, she has reached a state of personal alienation from which it seems the only escape route is to ‘go out on a limb,’ to cancel the life she is living and go in search of another. Taking her cue from a conversation randomly overheard between two strangers, she flies to Berlin, intent on tracking down a man she has never met.

There was a period of about a year when it seemed she had made a full recovery. Chemotherapy was over, and the operation to remove a tumour from her ovaries had been a success… Apart from the scar on her abdomen and the colour of her hair she was the same Stephanie Carlyle. That was how I saw it, anyway. But I was only twelve. Looking back, I think she behaved as if her time was limited, the pleasure she took in things disproportionate, nostalgic. Somehow the present was no longer the present, it was already past.

Kit drifts from place to place and from man to man: Klaus (a respectable orthodontist with an immaculate apartment and hidden tendencies to violence), Cheadle (a super-rich American with underworld contacts) and Oswald (who goes around carrying a piece of the Berlin Wall). For this first half of the novel, Katherine’s beauty acts as a passport and her quest is like a fantasy, the nineteen-year-old chosen princess moving through a potentially hostile world utterly without fear.

As the novel progresses, it gradually reveals itself as something other: magical and scintillating, an Odyssey with a female Odysseus, a story of time travel where the journeying mostly takes place within the space of the imagination. Thomson has Kit make repeated references to Antonioni’s 1975 film The Passenger and Katherine Carlyle shares many of the same dreamlike, uncanny resonances.

From the moment Katherine boards the train to Moscow the novel became a touchstone work for me, and the final sections in Archangelsk and Svalbard are like nothing I’ve read before. We understand that Kit is looking for somewhere cold – the winter temperatures in Svalbard range from -16 to – 46 degrees centigrade – in order to resolve the mystery and trauma of the eight years she spent in suspension as a frozen embryo. What she finds in the far-northern mining settlement of Ugolgrad is both more terrible and more revelatory than we could have imagined. The book’s ending could not be more perfect.

There’s a force at work, something I failed to anticipate. Since the place I’m heading for is clear in my mind only as an idea, and isn’t therefore, strictly speaking, a destination, I’m beginning to suspect that my eventual surroundings, whatever they might turn out to be, will have little or no relevance. The country I have chosen is hardly incidental, but this is not, at heart, a physical journey. It’s more like a journey back in time – or sideways, into another dimension.

Katherine Carlyle is speculative fiction in the most free-ranging, genre-bending sense of that term, hovering perpetually on the boundary between the lived and the imagined. Thomson’s language is note-perfect: never showy yet always elegant, always surprising, you won’t find a bad sentence from him here or ever. Turning the final page of Katherine Carlyle, I had to snap the book closed immediately, to shut myself in with it, to not look at or think about anything else for a while as I let myself assimilate what has immediately become a Book of My Heart.

The biggest mystery of all? Why are more people not reading and avidly discussing Rupert Thomson? His work shows a fascination with abstract concepts that makes it timeless, whilst remaining so deeply rooted in character it is always compelling as story. I remember feeling exactly the same sense of being overwhelmed and inspired when I read Death of a Murderer and then as now I think Rupert Thomson must be one of the most criminally underappreciated writers in Britain.

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